A bit more of Merlin's Legacy

In the last week, a chance has come up to get in on the ground floor of a new novel series, so I'm going to be devoting my time toward that. So, to keep my blog going, I'm going to post part of Chapter 2 of Merlin's Legacy, and then start some discussion on my progress on the series novel. For now, Here's more of Merlin's Legacy. Keep in mind that is is a first draft you're seeing and some, if not all, will be rewritten:

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        It was a week later before I could make the trip up to Maine. In that time, I had to quit all three jobs, because there was no telling how long I was going to be in Maine, and I didn't want to leave them hanging. Also in that week, Dad had talked to his brothers about Uncle Lucian, but they had nothing to add what Dad had told me. Lucian was a cipher, even to them.
I took a flight from BWI to Boston’s Logan Airport, rented a car and started driving north. It was late summer, so Fall foliage was still weeks away. I took I-95 through New Hampshire to the Maine Turnpike, the I-295 to US Route 1 North. Kennebunk, Freeport, Rockland, Bucksport and Cherryfield all fell behind me as I made my way to the area of Maine that was commonly known as Downeast coast.
A state route took me to Pilgrim’s Cove and I my first view of the town was from the crest of a hill. A hundred or so houses were clustered around a small bay formed by two headlands that jutted out into the Atlantic Ocean. On one headland, I could see a tall lighthouse, what the other one looked someone’s estate. The bay itself had a harbor and several dozen boats of all sorts were clustered in it. It looked like a nice quiet town.
My stomach rumbled, reminding me I hadn't eaten since that morning. As I went down the hill, I spotted a large stone building to my right, with a half-filled parking lot. A large sign proclaimed “WHITNEY’S YANKEE INN. FINE DINING SINCE 1771.”
I thought about it for maybe three seconds before I turned into the parking lot. The building looked as if it had been around for over two hundred years, stone slabs mortared into place, dark wood trim and doors and narrow windows. The parking lot was loose stone, with a low wooden rails marking out the lot’s perimeter. The cars were a mix of old and new, mostly Maine licence plates, with a couple of out of state plates mixed in.
I parked near the inn and got out. I’d dressed for comfort rather than appearance, a gray windbreaker over a golf shirt, military style pants and work boots. I wore a fanny pack with the letter and a few other items I wanted to keep on hand at all times. I took a second to stretch and work the kinks out of a long drive. As I did so, I looked around, getting a feel for the area.
It was near dusk, and it was cool. According to the weatherman I’d listened to on the way up, there was a cold front coming through the area and temperatures were going to be ten degrees below normal for the next several days. There were trees along the parking lot’s perimeter, and the ground sloped away from the lot.
I’d only taken a couple of steps when I saw a couple of shifty-looking guys come around the corner of the Inn and walk toward me. Both of them were on the thin side, a little taller than me, with similar narrow faces, unshaven and deeply sunken eyes. One was wearing a dirty green baseball cap, while the other one was bareheaded and both were wearing clothes that hadn’t seen the inside of a washing machine in a month. In a bad light, they might be mistaken for zombies.
I saw them at the same time they saw me. Neither one looked friendly as they moved to block my path to the inn. “Well, Gene,” No hat said, his voice too scratchy to be menacing.  “Looks like we have us a visitor.”
Baseball cap, who I assumed was Gene nodded. “Mister,” he said to me, Me and Mel here are the local welcoming committee.”
“Really?” I said in the most neutral tone I could manage.
“Looks like you had a problem recently,” Mel said, motioning to his own eyes.
“A disagreement,” I replied. Even after a week, my bruises hadn't completely faded .
“Well,” Gene said with a smile that exposed teeth that were yellower than a banana’s skin. We can help you avoid any misunderstandings with the locals — for a suitable fee, of course.”
“Of course,” I said. “Thank you for your offer, but I think I’ll pass.”
Both Mel and Gene scowled and moved toward me. “You’re making a mistake,” Mel said.
I took a deep breath, caught a whiff of body odor, and nearly gagged. Apparently their cloths weren’t the only thing that had been avoiding being washed in a while. I stepped back, my hands curling into fists. “It’s a free country,” I said.
The sharp sound of a siren from behind me was accompanied by red and blue lights bouncing off the walls of the inn. As quick as they appeared, they vanished, but I could hear a car engine idling and a car door opening. “Well,” a deep voice said from behind me, “Mel and Gene. Where have you been hiding?”
Both men shrank back. “We’re not doing nothing, Sheriff” Gene said in a simpering tone.
“I’m sure,” the voice said, dripping with sarcasm. “You know the drill, boys. On your knees, hands behind your head.”
Both of them complied. I waited until both of them were on my knees before I stepped back and turned to look at the police officer.
The officer was standing by his cruiser. He was taller than me by several inches, broad-shouldered and looking every inch a police officer. At first glance, he reminded me of a slightly older Denzel Washington, and his expression was stony. “Walker to dispatch,” he said into a radio attached to his jacket. “Get someone up to Witney’s ASAP. I found the Severine boys.”
“Paul’s on his way,” a female voice said.
“Good,” Walker replied, then looked at me. “Are you okay sir?”
“I’m fine,” I replied with a wave.
“These two didn't hurt you?”
“This?” I asked, motioning to my face. “Happened last week a thousand miles away from here. I’m fine. You showed up just in time.”
“Good. Where are you from?”
“Maryland.”
“Long way for a vacation.”
I shook my head. “Business, I’m afraid. I’m here to settle my great-uncle’s estate.”
“Who’s your great-uncle?”
“Lucian Merlin.”
I heard a gasp from one of the Severines and I glanced at them. Both of them looked like they were ready to get up and run. But Walker growled, “Gene, Mel, stay where you are.”
I looked back at the sheriff, who was eyeing me. You’re Lucian’s great-nephew then?”
“Yes. Lucian was my grandfather’s brother. None of the family knew he was still alive until I got the latter from Lucian’s lawyer.”
“Who’s the lawyer?”
“Charles Windicott.”
Just then, another police car pulled into the parking lot. A second officer got out and looked at Walker. “Where are they?” Walker pointed and the second officer grimaced. “Aw, Sheriff. It’s going to take me weeks to get the smell out of my car!”
“Then the quicker you get them into jail, the better.”
“Can’t I hose them down first?”
“Deputy Hartwell,” Walker said in a tone of resigned patience. “Arrest the Severine boys and charge them with public disorder, panhandling, and public intoxication. I want them processed before I finish dinner.”
Hartwell didn't look happy, but he complied, and five minutes later, both Severine boys were cuffed and in the back of Hartwell's car. As they were being driven off the lot, Walker turned to me. “Sorry about that,” he said, his tone changing to a warmer one. He walked over and held out his hand. “TJ Walker, I’m Pilgrim’s Cove’s Sheriff.”
I took the hand. “Roger Merlin,” I said.
We shook hands. Walker glanced back at his car. “Tell you what,” he said. “Let me park my car, and you can join me for dinner.”
“Okay,” I replied.

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Craig

Rise of the Chaos Stallion, Chapter One

Major change here....

After careful consideration, I'm replacing the chapters of my Merlin's chronicles with new fan-fiction. In part, I think it's time to get serious about doing something with the story.

In it's place, I will be Posting a My Hero Academia/Ranma 1/2 story I've been working on. It's called Rise of the Chaos Stallion, and the premise is, "Suppose instead of Ranma being a student at UA, he was a teacher? How would UA handle one gender-changing Chaos Magnet that is Ranma Satome?" I will replace the Merlin chapters one for one with Chaos Stallion chapters. So without further delay, the first chapter. 

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My Hero Academia is the property of Kōhei Horikoshi, while Ranma 1/2 is the property of Rumiko Takahashi. The story is nothing more than a writing exercise when I need to clear my palette after writing some other stories. I do not have any claim to the characters or the universes that each inhabits, which I have flung together for this story. This is a free story, which I will be posting to a couple of major websites in the near future (2024). Please enjoy.

Rise of The Chaos Stallion

There are so many people who helped get where I am today.

My mother, who loved me and still worries about me.

Ochaka, who was with me at he start of my journey as a hero and has

stayed by my side the entire time. Shinso, training partner and friend. A man who took what people saw as

a villain's quirk and showed the world it was the user, not the quirk The fellow students of what became the hero class that all others hero classes

at UA and elsewhere are measured against, you became the family I needed

and the friends anyone would be proud to have.

The UA teaching staff, who molded us into what the country and the world

needed. Shota Aizawa, who was hard on us from day one and never let us forget that

being a hero is more that posing and sound bites. You pushed us, but you did

it for the right reasons. Toshinori Yagi – All Might – who showed the world what a hero is and what

we all aspire to be. Without your mentoring and friendship, I would not be

half the hero I am today, nor be the man that I am now. Being your friend is

the greatest honor I have ever received. Sorahiko Torino – Grand Torino – You taught me a lot sensei, and I still carry

the memories (and the scars) of our time together. And finally, to the man who started as my sensei, but became like an older brother

to me in every way but blood. All Might gave me my chance to be a hero, but it was

you who refined what I am today. Your instruction, your philosophy, and your code

of honor has left a mark on me and the others of our class that forms the core of our

being. For that, I thank you, Ranma Satome, for being you, no matter which form

you were in at the time. – Acknowledgment page from Deku: Autobiography of a Hero NabTen publishing

Chapter 1 – Help Wanted

UA High School was the premier high school for those who wanted to be heroes.

On a sprawling campus, generations of heroes learned to use their quirks and to

practiced the necessary skills to become heroes. Taught by pro heroes, UA grads from

the Heroes course were among the elite, the best of the best that made the high school's

motto, "Plus Ultra!" a part of their personality.

They were halfway through the current school term, but already, UA's principal

and staff of the Heroes course were looking at next year's class. Planning like this was

common, as the course of instruction was intense and hard. A student with a powerful

quirk but was a poor hero would be a hazard to both villain and bystanders.

Because of their already busy schedule (Most teachers were also active heroes),

planning meetings like this usually occurred on Saturday afternoons, after classes were

over for the day. The school was quiet and almost peaceful.

"So, we are agreed that the next class of students will start learning martial arts?"

Nezu asked. He was the most unusual person in the room, because he wasn't human,

but a white-furred creature with an high IQ and was UA's principal.

"I'm still not sold on this idea," Ectoplasm said. He was the math teacher in the

Heroes course, as well as one of the better-known heroes on staff. His lean frame was

hidden under a tan cloak, and his black mask hid his features. "Gunhead's a good

teacher. Why not use him?" He has already turned it down," Nezu replied. "Between his hero work and his

training hall, he's stretched too thin to include regular classes here at UA." The bear/

mouse/dog sighed. "We need a full-time teacher for such a position. I want to integrate

the martial arts into our core teaching." Ectoplasm shook his head. "Martial arts have become passe. Where do we

find someone who could do the job?" "We look, of course," Nezu replied. "And where do we do that? Where do we find someone with the skills you

want?" "Ecto's right," said Snipe, who was sitting across the conference table from

Ectoplasm. He was dressed as a cowboy with a gas mask covering his face. "I can

think of only half-a-dozen heroes who have had any training and only because such

training takes advantage of their quirks." Nezu turned to look at Snipe. "There are a few places that still teach martial

arts. The instructor we seek need not be a hero." "I don't know about that," Ectoplasm said. "Bring in a non-hero would raise

some hackles at the Heroes' Commission." "Leave them to me."
A blocky-looking man with gray skin like concrete and small eyes said, "You're

going to have to find someone who can adapt to the student's quirks and still make

them effective fighters."

"That's a tall order, Ken," Snipe said. Ken Ishiyama (Hero name: Cementoss) shrugged. "We still have time to find one

and get them in place." At the other end of the table, Toshinori Yagi – better known to the world as All

Might – sat back and watched as his fellow heroes debated the question of a martial

arts teacher for the heroes course. To conserve his strength, he was in his "civilian

form" – a tall, gaunt man with sharp, angular features and long limbs. He looked

nothing like the Symbol of Peace that the world knew him as. "We need to find someone who can teach and work with our students," Shota

Aizawa said. The underground hero known as Eraserhead looked at he always did –

pale, stringy black hair, tired and unshaven. "And how do we do that?" asked Hizashi Yamada, the hero known as Present

Mike. The Heroes' course English teacher was generally upbeat and over the top.

With a high-peaked blonde hairdo, smoke-colored glasses, small mustache, and

leather jacket made him look like a hipster biker. "These kids are not going to take

any non-hero teacher we bring in seriously." Out of the corner of his eye, Toshinori noticed Nemuri Kayama's expression.

The R-rated hero: Midnight was normally flirty and part of every conversation. But

now, she looked pensive and in thought. She was dressed in civilian clothes – a

blouse, jeans, and boots – instead of her normal skintight hero's uniform. Toshinori turned and stared at her. It took several seconds for the woman to feel

his gaze and she gave him a embarrassed look. "Something who should know about, Toshinori, Nemuri?" Nezu asked. They both looked down the table at the principal, and found everyone else staring

at them. "Sorry," Toshinori said. Nemuri shook her head. "No, it's my fault. I think I may know of someone who

might fit the bill as a martial arts instructor, but I'm not sure he's right for the position." "It's not like we have a long list to consider at the moment," Snipe drawled. "Agreed," Ishiyama added. He added a "come on" gesture with his blocky hand. "Indeed," Nezu said. "The sooner you say the name, the sooner we can debate it." "All right." Nemuri said, then took a deep breath. "Ranma Satome." There was silence for a few seconds, then Nezu chuckled. "An interesting choice." "Not sure that's a good idea," Shota said, with a shake of his head. "That kid is chaos

personified." Toshinori frowned. "I'm not familiar with that name." Nezu's chuckle became a laugh. "You are of course, familiar with the Nermia ward

of Tokyo?" "Not much. As far as I know, there are no hero agencies in the ward, because crime

is so low. The locals take care of any problems themselves." The principal nodded. "Because the residents are one of the few areas in Japan where

martial arts are still practiced. A number of unique ones have cropped up over the years

and they have a low tolerance for criminals, even those with quirks." "So, who is this Satome characters?" "Ranma Satome is probably the best martial artist in the last three generations,"

Nemuri replied. "His style is Anything Goes Martial arts, a style that takes the best from

other arts and combines them into an effective style of combat with few equals." "Sounds like self-promotion," Hizashi said, his expression suspicious. "I've seen him fight several times, against people that would give us pros some

tense minutes. In addition to his fighting skills, he is a Ki master on a grandmaster

level – he can project his Ki on a level of someone with a strong quirk." "Define projection." "Remember those two mountains in China that exploded a couple of years ago?

That was Satome." The table was silent for several seconds. "What is this guy's quirk?" Snipe asked. "I'll get to that in a moment," Nemuri said. "He was the one who killed Saffron." "That's impossible!" Vlad King (real name, Sekijiro Kan) snapped. "Saffron's quirk

is Phoenix Rebirth!" "I never said Saffron stayed dead – just that Ranma had killed him." Toshinori nodded. "I remembered that. Saffron was threatening to launch a war

of conquest, and China was ready to launch nuclear weapons into the mountains where

Saffron's people lived. We had assembled a team of world-class heroes and were trying

to get the Chinese to allow us to assist, when all of a sudden, the mountain blew up and

the crisis vanished. We only found out that Saffron had been killed in some battle and

was reborn as a child a couple of months afterwards." "Well, I never heard anything about this," Snipe said. "It wasn't something we talked about publicly," Toshinori said. "If it had gotten

out, it would have been a diplomatic mess." Nemuri nodded. "The second mountain was Ranma squaring off against Musk

Prince Herb." "He faced off against the Dragon and survived?" Sekijiro said. "I want to meet this

guy!" "What makes you think the kids will listen to someone like him?" Snipe asked. Nemuri's smile was somewhat sad. "He's only twenty-two years old." Another round of stunned silence went around the table. Nezu chuckled again. "Yes,

barely old enough to be considered an adult!" "All right, he sounds like the type of guy we need," Snipe said. "But what's the catch?" Nemuri sighed. "A number of them. First, his quirk." "You glossed over that earlier," Snipe said. "Well, it's called Chaos Magnet, and he attracts trouble." "Define trouble." "People like Saffron and Herb. He has a few regular opponents he fights, with

the occasional Quirk criminal who tries his luck in Nermia." Nemuri inhaled deeply.

"Second, he's Gemma Satome's son." "The Vigilante Phatman," Shota said with a nod. "I've heard of him, but he hasn't

been active in years." "That's because he's been training Ranma to be the best martial artist in the world

for the last ten years." Midnight's face darkened in anger. "From what I know, I'm

surprised Ranma hasn't snapped. The training he put Ranma through is beyond child

abuse, and the fat bastard used him as trade bait by promising to have Ranma marry

someone in return for things like food or training, the stealing him back and running

away." "Ain't Gemma the one who studied under the mega-pervert Happosai?" Snipe

asked. "Him and Soun Tendo," Nemuri replied. "The underground hero, Demon Head.

Soun's retired now." "I've heard Happosai surfaced a few years back," Ken said. He motioned with

one of his blocky hands and scowled. "They say no prison can hold him for long and

no woman's undergarments are safe from him." "Sadly, a minor player in the villain world," Nezu said in an unhappy tone. "He's

too experienced and tricky to capture without a lot of effort, and he's not worth the

trouble. He's made a fool of many heroes over the years." "And this Ranma studied under Happosai?" Snipe growled. "We don't need

a pervert on staff." "From what I've been told, Ranma isn't thrilled with the old goat," Nemuri

replied. "Which leads to the next problem is he has a Jusenkyo curse." "A what?" Hizashi asked, his expression puzzled. There was laughter, followed by a thud from the head of the table. Everyone

looked in time to see Nezu climb back into chair, his expression one of mirth. "He

went to Jusenkyo? I didn't think anyone was that stupid!" He began laughing again. "That's Gemma's fault," Nemuri said. "The idiot can't speak or read Chinese,

but that didn't stop him from going there." "What is a Jusenkyo curse?" Toshinori asked. Nemuri inhaled slowly. "In China, in the Bayankala Mountain range, there

was an area called Jusenkyo. It was said to be a training area, which what brought

Gemma to it. It was an area dotted with small pools that cursed anyone who fell

into them." "In what way?" "They take on the form of the first thing that drowned in the pool. When they

get hit with hot water, they change back into their original forms, but the next time

they get hit with cold water, they take the form of the being that drowned in the pool." Hizashi gave her a suspicious look. "What?" "When Ranma gets hit with cold water, he becomes a girl. Hot water turns

him back to a boy." With the exception of Nezu and Snipe, the expressions on her fellow teachers'

faces were that of stunned disbelief. "You're joking, right?" Shota said. Nemuri reached down next to her chair and placed a large purse on the table.

She opened it up and sorted through the contents until she found what she was looking

for. She pulled out two photo and held up one The photo was that of a young man with

dark hair done in a pigtail, wearing a red Chinese shirt and black pants. "This is Ranma's

male form – his birth form." She held up the second picture, showing a girl, wearing the same type of clothes

as Ranma. She was shorter and busty, with red hair down in a similar hairstyle as Ranma.

"This is Ranma's female form." She presented both photos to Toshinori. The thin man studied the photos for several

seconds. "Are you sure? This redhead could be his twin sister." "They're the same person." Toshinori passed the photos to Cementoss. "Are you sure that this isn't some sort

of trick or quirk?" "I certain. Haven't you heard stories of a Panda in Nermia?" "I have," Shota said. "But that's just an urban legend." "No, that's Gemma Satome – he fell into the Spring of Drowned Panda." Shota rubbed his forehead. "You're giving me a headache, Midnight." "That's not all – there are other victims of Jusenkyo living or regularly visit Nermia." "There's more of them?" Hizashi demanded. "I think Shota's headache is contagious." "You keep using the past tense regarding Jusenkyo," Toshinori said. "The springs were destroyed during Ranma's fight with Saffron," Nemuri replied. "You seem to know a lot about this Ranma," Sekijiro said. "Soun Tendo is my brother-in-law." She let that hang in the air for a few seconds

before she continued. "He and his three daughters -- my nieces -- live in Nermia. The

middle daughter attended UA." She looked at the principal. Nezu cackled. "I know Nabiki Tendo. She graduated top of her class from UA's

business track two years ago and is currently a Junior at UA University. She's almost

as smart as she thinks she is." Midnight nodded. "The oldest – Kasumi – writes letters to me a couple of times

a month, keeping me up to date on what's going on. Ranma is engaged to my youngest

niece – Akane. An arranged marriage that neither one wanted, and is the cause of most

of the trouble Ranma has gotten into over the last three years." "I don't know," Snipe said. "Sounds like the kid is more trouble than we can

afford to have." "But can we afford to dismiss him out of hand?" Ken asked. He passed the photos

onto Shota. "He's taken on two beings with powerful quirks and won." Nemuri leaned forward. "I think we should go talk to him and see if he has

what we're looking for." "And how do we do that without alerting every villain to what we're doing?"

Snipe asked. For the first time since the meeting started, Nemuri smiled. "I think it's time

for Aunt Nemuri to visit her nieces."

Another Early Scene From Merlin's Legacy

Felt lousy the last couple of days, so not thinking abut the magic end of things. To keep things on schedule, here's the second scene from the first chapter of Merlin's Legacy. As before, this is subject to change, as it is a first draft....

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I spent twelve hours in the local hospital’s emergency room. In addition to a torso that was rapidly becoming a abstract work of art, the bastard who punched me in the face cracked my nose, leaving me with two black eyes. The bill wasn't cheap either — five thousand dollars that I didn't have.
The detective who interviewed me, a shallow-faced man with a bushy mustache who introduced himself as Sergent Haylock, didn't give me any hope my attackers were going to be caught anytime soon. He asked his questions with a droning tone, took down my answers in his little notebook, and asked questions about my uncles and any letters their lawyers might send me. He then wandered into the idiotic portion of the interview. “Do you owe anyone money?”
“No one that would send masked thugs after me,” I replied. “Besides, I’m not far enough behind on any of my bills to provoke anything more then a request for payment.”
“Any enemies?”
“No.”
“Are you involved in any illegal activities?”
“No. I don’t have time. I’m working three jobs as it is.” He asked me where I worked and I told him.
He seemed surprised that one of my jobs was teaching martial arts at one of the local schools. “I thought you’d would have done a better job of defending yourself.”
I had to fight to keep my temper under control. “I was tired. I worked all three jobs today, and I’d been up since five am. The last place I expected to be attacked was in my own apartment.”
“Yes, your apartment,” Haylock said, scribbling something into his notebook. “Who has a key to it?”
“Besides myself and the corporation that owns the apartment? No one. I never gave out any duplicate keys.”
“No ex-girlfriend?”
“Haven’t had a girlfriend in six months, and she never had a key to my apartment. Our relationship never got to that point.”
“There’s no signs of forced entry.”
“Maybe they picked the lock,” I said.
“If they did, they were very good at it. Did you keep anything valuable in the apartment?”
I shook my head and winced at the pain. "Nothing that was worth breaking in and beating me to a pulp.”
After half an hour of questioning, Haylock declared that he was finished and left. I dozed a little until my younger brother showed up to take me home.
Most people don’t believe we’re brothers. I’m short and thick with dark eyes and hair, while AJ (Only our mom calls him Andrew, and only when she’s mad,) was tall, lean, with blond hair and a winning smile. I’m not the most friendly of people, while AJ has an easy charm about him that made him attractive to women and welcomed by men. To AJ, all sports came easy; to me, I had to work hard to get my black belt and even harder to be worthy of it. Still he was my brother, and we got along.
AJ walked in, took one look at me and said, “Man, you look like some ran you over!”
“Har, har.”
“Seriously, you okay?”
“Nothing broken but my pride. The doctor said I need to rest for a couple of days.”
It took another hour and a half to get the discharge papers, then AJ drove me home.  On the way, I told him what happened. “Sounds like you pissed off someone,” he said when I was done.
“I don’t have the time,” I replied. “They wanted some stupid letter one of our uncles’ lawyers supposedly sent me. “
”But you don’t know which one?”
“Nope. They were too busy demanding the letter and stomping me to tell me which one.”
“I’ll call mom. Maybe she knows.”
I groaned. “You want to worry her?”
“Too late, Bro. Miranda told her.”
I groaned. Miranda’s my sister, two years older than me physically, but twenty years older mentally. She was more mother than sister, and she never let me get away with anything.
“Great,” I said. “I should give mom a call and let her know I’m not dead.”
“Good idea,” AJ replied.

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The apartment looked like a hurricane had hit it. In the excitement, I’d missed the ransacking. Books and papers were everywhere and a few prized knick-knacks had been tossed around for no reason I saw.
AJ guided me to the couch and checked the bedroom. “They tossed it too,” he said. “Who are these idiots?”
“No clue,” I replied. “But I’m hungry, tired and pissed.”
“I’ll call for a pizza,” AJ said. “And help you clean up a bit.”
By the time he left, it was early evening, we’d eaten enough pizza to keep us full for a while, and cleaned up the place enough so I could finish the rest of it later. I called Mom, assured her I wasn't on my deathbed, talked to dad and asked about my uncles. Dad has two brothers, while Mom has two brothers and two sisters. He didn't know why any of them would send me anything. I thanked him, assured Mom again I was all right and ended the conversation. I then called work, told them what happened and told them I was taking a couple of days off. They weren't happy, so I told them I’d be by the next day to show them.
I was about to head for bed when I realized I hadn't collected my mail. Muttering some curses under my breath, I went down to the mailboxes in the lobby and retrieved a large bundle of mail from my box. I didn't bother looking at it there, but went back to my apartment, tossed the mail onto a side table, locked and bolted the front door, then wedged a chair under the door handle, checked the balcony, locked the sliding door and went to bed.


More later

Craig

An Early Scene From Merlin's Legacy

Actually, it's the first scene of Chapter One. I should warn you, I've already decided to rewrite some of this, so this isn't a polished product by any stretch of the imagination. It also hasn't been edited, so there are mistakes in it. Just remember it's a rough draft.

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My name is Roger Alvin Merlin, and my new life started when someone tried to kill me.
It was little more than a week into August when I parked my ten-year old Oldsmobile in the parking lot of my apartment building and got it. It was near midnight, and I was tired and wanted to do nothing more than to grab a bite to eat and get some sleep.
My apartment building was a six-floor structure, one of four arranged in an off-kilter rectangle. It wasn't the best area in the area, which was just outside of Washington DC, but it was a blue collar neighborhood, with hard working people.
I let myself through the front door with my own key and walked to the elevator. There was a slight whiff of food and body aroma in the air, mixed with a slight tang of the newly painted walls, that would be sufficient to give me a headache if I stayed in the lobby. Fortunately, the elevator was on the ground floor and I stepped inside.
I punched the button for the fifth floor and leaned against the car’s wall and closed my eyes.  I was working fifty-five hours a week at three part-time jobs, and I was tired. The economy was in poor shape, and I couldn't find a full-time job. I was making enough to keep my head above water, but only just, and my car needed work. I had bills, including college, and owed the IRS a chunk of change. I had few friends and a girlfriend wasn't in the cards. In short, I was alone, struggling, and not worth anyone’s time or effort to mug.
When the elevator doors opened, I walked out, turned right, and headed for my apartment. The hallway was starkly empty, with a dark green industrial carpet and beige walls bereft of any character. The apartment doors were a lighter shade of beige, with a number and a peephole. While the carpet deadened my footsteps, I knew the hallway was one large echo chamber.
Apartment 512 looked like all the other doors, drab, unremarkable, and conforming. More than one I had thought of painting the door another color, but the tenet’s lease forbade that, and I couldn't afford getting thrown out. I unlocked the door, opened it, stepped inside —
And nearly got my head taken off by a baseball bat.
The only things that saved me was my peripheral vision and my reflexes. I saw the bat coming at my head and I ducked. The bat grazed my head and slammed into the door with a loud “clang!” I spun toward the attacker, grabbed his arm and punched the guy in the nose. The guy, who was wearing a ski mask and a surplus army jacket, managed to jerk his head back just enough so I didn't flatten his nose. But he snarled a curse and bounced off the wall next to my front door.
Then thug number two made his presence known. An arm snaked around my throat and yanked me back. “The letter!” someone growled in my ear. “Where is the letter?”
I snapped my head back and tried to stomp on his foot, but I was wearing tennis shoes and he was wearing work boots. He avoided my head butt and yanked me back, in an attempt to pull me off balance. I went with the yank, adding my own weight and momentum to his, resulting both of us stumbling back. We hit the back of my couch and we both went over her. He let go of his choke-hold, and we bounced on the couch and hit the floor. I rolled over and onto my feet, only to have a third skin-mask and army jacketed thug, this one with a knife, come at me. “Get him!” he snapped.
I grabbed a book off the table next to me and threw it at the knife wielder. The book struck him in the head and his knife missed me by several inches. I yelled as I kicked him in the groin, then spun as I felt a hand on my shoulder. Thug number two got his punch in first, and I saw stars. He followed up with a couple of knees to my solar plexus that took the breath out of me. Gasping for air, I grabbed him by the jacket and fell back, taking him with me. I managed to get my foot into his stomach and threw him into the bookcase behind me. He hit the bookshelves like a bowling ball hitting pins, and several shelves collapsed, showing him with half of my collection of hardbacks.
The other two thugs didn't like that. As I tried to get up, one of them kicked me in the ribs. Pain flared along my side, and I grunted in pain because I couldn't scream. “Where’s the damn letter?” Thug two screamed at me. He kicked me again. “Give us the damn letter from your uncle’s lawyer!”
I wasn't in any shape to answer, even if I know what the hell he was talking about. Why would one of my uncles’ lawyer send me a letter? Instead, I tried getting some air back into my lungs, which didn't make Mister Kicky any happier. “He kicked me again. “Where is that damn letter, you motherfucker?”
My temper, which has never been a friend of mine, got the better of me. I got up as he kicked me again, this time in the shins. I staggered, grabbed another book from the side table and flung it at my tormentor I had the satisfaction of watching the book bounce off his face right before thug number one slammed his baseball bat across my stomach. For the second time in a minute, I was on the ground, grasping for air.
“We want that letter!” Thug two screamed, punctuating each word with a kick. My torso was screaming at me, and air wasn't coming in my lungs fast enough. Someone started screaming and for a few seconds, I thought it was me. But then I heard Thug two snarl, “Let’s go!”
The kicking stopped and I heard my front door slam open and the I heard the sounds of several people running down the hall and several voices I couldn't understand. Slowly, I got up on my hands and knees. Breathing was a chore, but at least I could do it.
I felt someone kneel next to me, and I lifted my head to look at Mister Spadaro, one of my neighbors. “Take it easy son,” he said, placing a gentle hand on my shoulder. “The police and the paramedics are on the way.”
I nodded and lowered myself down to the floor again. Mister Spadaro, on older man with a tanned face, carefully turned me over, and used a couch pillow to cushion my head. I was still lying there when the paramedics arrived.

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Like I said, it's a rough draft. Comments are welcomed.

Craig

Magic in Merlin's Heir Series (pt 2)

Still musing here....Don't try this at home folks, I'm an semi-trained writer with no insurance! This is another stream of thought, done on the fly, and will probably embarrass me sometime down the road.....

There are two forms of energy Order Magic users can call on, for different purposes. Manna and Chi. Both these energy forms are in the environment around the magic user, and they dictate what spells can be used.

Manna is energy given off by the classic basic elements --- Fire, Water, Earth, and Air. There are millions of smaller sources of manna, as every non-living thing on the planet has some manna in it, but everything falls under one of the four elements. Under most circumstances, a wizard or witch will use manna from the basic elements for spells.

Earth and air manna are the most common, and are readily available for a human magical user's use. Fire and water need a source to be useful, but the more powerful and experienced a wizard is, the less manna they need to work their spells with. So, while a novice or weak magic user might need a bonfire or a lake to create the spell, a master wizard could get by with a recently put out campfire or a puddle to create the same spell. Most attack and defense spells are manna-based.

As I mentioned before, all non-living material gives off manna, but in small quantities compared to the major elements. Items like rocks, metal, plastic, sand, glass, all give off manna. However, raw material gives off more manna than refined material, so an untouched granite bolder gives off more manna than a granite statue of the same weight. A wizard will use these other items for various reasons, including wards and to add extra energy to a spell. Gemstones are prized for their manna, and most wizards will carry a few for their use in spells.

Chi is the energy given off by all living things. Like with Manna, living (raw) life has more energy than dead (refined) life. The amount of energy given off is based on size, length of life, and intelligence of the lifeform. Humans give off more chi than most animals.

Chi is trickier to use than manna. For one, most magic user use only their own chi. Using someone else chi without their permission is considered a series breach of trust. Necromancy is using spirit chi to control spirits of the dead, and is one of the few things that will cause the magic users community to band together and hunt the Necromancer down.

Second, the spells that need chi are limited. Most Chi-based spells are for things like strengthening the human body, healing wounds, or pushing the human body to over its limits. A magic user doesn't have enough chi to use it like a fireball or force bolt spell. Any chi spells are either internal to the wizard/witch or delivered by touch.

While it would be theoretically possible to change a human into an animal, the amount of time and animal chi needed would be too high to sustain the change. The more extreme a change is, the more chi it takes, as the chi of the target needs to be overwhelmed to force the change.

That's enough for now -- now I have the weekend to do some more thinking....

Craig

Magic in Merlin's Heir Series (pt 1)

I've decided to blog a few times about the background of Merlin's Heir series, in part to firm up my own thoughts about a few things. Today, a running stream of thought regarding Magic in the world of Merlin's Heir,(Part one of the stream in any case....),

Since Merlin's Heir series are set in the modern world, I don't have to worry about creating the background from scratch. But the magical system for this world has to be created from scratch (so, to speak). So, this is what I have in mind so far:

Magic is defined in the world of Merlin's Heir as the manipulation of energy by an individual to effect the surrounding environment in some significant way.

Magic is divided into two forms: Order Magic and Chaos Magic. Order Magic is using the energy in the surrounding environment to cast spells. This covers the magic used by human wizards, witches, and the magical races that exist in the world. Now, Order Magic is called that not because it's used by good people --- evil wizards/witches use Order Magic just like good wizards/witches. It's because those wielding it use the type of environmental energy required for the spell, based on the results the wizard is seeking. If the wizard uses a fireball spell, they must use fire energy. a water-based spell needs water energy, and so on. By manipulating the amount of each energy stream used, the wizard/witch can adjust the spell's effects.

On the other hand, Chaos Magic is unnatural and 100% evil. It is the energy demons use, and if they find a human eager or desperate enough to worship them, the demons grant the worshipers access to their energy. Those who use the Chaos energy for spell-casting are known as Sorcerers. The demonic energy is subject to the sorcerer's will, and the strongest users are very dangerous. But Chaos energy is dangerous to use and subject to the demon's whim.

The difference is who can use each type of magic. Wizards/Witches are born with the ability to sense and use the energy around them. They have to learn how to use their gifts and vary in strength from weak to very strong. The main difference between wizards and witches is their approach: Wizards are more scientific in their approach to teaching and researching, while witches are more spiritual in their magic use. Relations between the two branches are still strained after the witch-hunting of the middle ages.

Sorcerers don't need any special ability, just a willingness to deal with one of the many demon lords. The Chaos energy is like an addictive drug, and sorcerers becomes addicted to the feeling of power. Sorcerers generally establishing themselves as head of a cult serving the demon lord who granted them the power.

I think that's all for now....need to do some more thinking....

Craig

The Merlin's Heir Series --- My Original World

I'm going to talk a bit about writing in your own universe. In this case, it's writing in the world of Merlin's Heir.

Up to now, most of my writing has been either in fanfiction (Anime series), or in a shared universe (Battletech). Both are universes created by someone else, and everything is laid out --- the main characters, locations, situations, even the technology/magical level, all established and need only the story and original characters (main or supporting). In fanfiction, I'm a great believer in staying within the universe created by the anime series, so my stories are clearly in the universe set out by the creators. With Battletech, most of the universe is set in stone, and even my fanfiction based in that universe is with the confines set by those markers. My profession Battletech writing is even more closely settled in the universe.

On the other hand, original stories are harder to write, because everything in an original story has to come from the author. “Well, d’oh,” you might be saying, “that’s what an original story is.”

True, but until you sit down and begin thinking it through, you may not realize how much stuff a story needs. There’s the obvious things: characters, plot, and locations. But original stories need so much more.

In the Merlin Heir series, magic is a large part of the books’ theme, but I need to create the magical rules system that the hero must operate under. And since magic is not a set of laws I can go ahead and look up when I need to, I need to create them and establish what the hero can and can't do with magic. I have to create a system so not only do I understand it, but so does the reader.

For some reason I cannot understand, I set the Merlin’s Legacy in a small town in Maine. Yes, Maine. (I guess my subconsciousness likes Murder, She Wrote when it came to the planning phase if things, as I've never read Steven King.) Somehow, setting the novel here in Florida doesn't feel right, while Maine does. What hurts is I've never been to Maine, cannot afford to travel to Maine , and I don’t have any friends up there to ask for background on Maine. I have to research Maine and get enough details for a convincing background (travel guide, Wikipedia, and websites.) On the plus side, Merlin’s Legacy and Merlin’s Staff are set in that part of Maine. On the minus side, Merlin’s Trial is mostly set in San Francisco, while Merlin’s Courtship is primarily set in Boston. So, two more cities I've never visited need to be researched.

(If anyone living in Maine, San Francisco, or Boston want to share their experiences or local knowledge of these areas, I will not say no.)

Then there is the small stuff. My main character uses Latin to call up his spells, while the main villain uses German. Another character uses the Fae language (Gaelic that I've slightly altered) for her spells. I also have Arthurian elements that I need to blend into the story. The right characters need to be snarky at the right time.

If this sounds like i'm complaining, I'm not. In some ways, it's liberating. It's the difference between riding a bicycle with training wheels and without. And while I'm not ready to leave Battletech anytime soon, being able to do something that is all mine is a good feeling.

I’ll go into some more detail into each Merlin's Heir novel in future posts.

Craig