I mentioned in a previous post that the key was write something you wanted to read. When Rick Chesler put the word out he was looking for co-authors for his new action series, I stepped forward because those of the type of novels I like to read. So I decided to put forward a post about what sort of novels I liked and why I I wanted to write African Firestorm.
So, I divided this up into two different posts. This one is about the adventure series that I enjoy reading. The next is about those authors whose adventure/thriller novels I enjoy reading. There's different set of authors I enjoy in other genre, but that 's for another post.
Here they are:
Doc Savage
Before Superman, before most super heroes as we know them today in the comics and the big screen, there were the pulp heroes whose exploits were in the monthly pulp magazines of the early 1930's through the end of the 1940's. One of those heroes, mostly forgotten to mainstream readers is Doc Savage, The Man of Bronze.
Trained from birth to be a hero, Clark Savage Jr. ("Doc") was both a physical marvel and a mental giant, who traveled the world with his team of men, fighting evils in all forms. Villains using science-fiction weapons, lost civilizations, and monsters were taken head on with Doc and his team's brains and brawn. Like the cliffhanger serials of the 1930s, Doc saved the world from all sorts of danger. The most interesting this is that a lot of the futuristic technology in these novels are commonplace today.
I can to these novels through the 1975 George Pal Movie and the first one I brought through the Scholastic Book program through school. When I was old enough, I would haunt through used book stores, looking for the Bantam paperbacks. The reprints by Vintage Library I have the first dozen, but my budget hasn't allowed me to continue buying them or the new ones written by Will Murray. But I have most of the Bantam run, and when I need to escape into a cliffhanger, that's where I go.
The Shadow
If Doc Savage and Supermen are related (Both had Fortresses of Solitude, for example), so are the Shadow and Batman. Both are dark avengers who strike fear in the hearts of Criminals everywhere. Both are rich men who rub soldiers with the movers and shakers (Even though the Shadow's isn't really Lamont Cranson, but an impostor using Cranson's name)
But while Batman is (mostly) a solo act, the Shadow had a network of agents to aid him in his fight against evil. But the Shadow and his twin .45s were never far away, and bad guys never knew when he was coming.
While I was aware of The Shadow (Though the radio show), my first exposure was the comics of the 80's. After that, the Movie, then the Vintage Library's reprints. Sadly, like with the Doc Savage, I haven't been able to keep up with the series. but I have a few radio shows, a few of the Vintage Library reprints and if my mood takes me, both the modern movie on DVD and the movie soundtrack (I like Tyler Dane's "Original Sin" from the soundtrack).
Mack Bolan: The Executioner
If I had to name one series that I consider my key series, it would have to be this one. It was the first adult series I read, taking my dad's copy and reading them starting at the age of thirteen., and when I can, I read them today
For forty years, Mack Bolan, special forces and war vet (Originally the Vietnam war) has been fighting the evil man brings to his fellow man. When most of his family died, he was called home to bury them. Once there, he found that the mafia had been indirectly involved with their death. Untouchable by the police, the local mafia saw themselves above the law --- until Bolan decided to declare war on them. For the first forty or so volumes, Bolan's war was against the Mafia, going across the country, conducting a guerrilla war. Later, he took on terrorists, criminal cartels, madmen of all types, at first for the US Government agent, then as a lone wolf with an arm's length relationship. With his near trade mark 9mm Beretta and his .50 Desert Eagle, Bolan wages a war against anyone who threatens innocents anywhere in the word.
In addition to Bolan series, I also read two related series, Phoenix Force and Able Team. All operate under an umbrella of Stony Man group. They too fight threats against innocents and good people.
The Death Merchant
This is probably the least known and the oddest series of the four series I like.
Richard Camellion is a mercenary working for the CIA, taking extreme missions and leaving a high body count behind him. He is cynical. nihilistic, and has a high IQ. The stories are a little more out there --- Mind control drugs, Clones, underwater cities, man-triggered natural disasters are a few of the plots Camelion must stop.
While the plots are on the edge, the action is realistic and brutal. Someone isn't just shot; instead, where each round goes and what damage it does is described in detail. The same with other forms of mayhem. There are also small nuggets of information to pick up on. This is not everyone sort of series; Camelion is a bit of an asshole, and holds strong views. He also has a low regard for most of the human race, and doesn't hide it.
But I like the series because it is different. There's enough little things I can pick up on for use elsewhere, and it showed me how to write a anti-hero and make still the good guy besides his faults.
Well, that's it. Next time should be the authors I like in the adventure/thriller field.
Later!
Craig
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Saturday, May 2, 2015
Thursday, April 30, 2015
The Ups and Down of Sales Watching
I still haven't gotten over the urge to look at he sales ranking for African Firestorm a few times a day. And I'm finding the experience humbling and a learning moment which can be summed up as: Do not obsessed over the sales ranking!
African Firestorm has been as high as #51,512 then drop to #153, 437, then back up at #55,450, all in a space of a few days. And as time has gone on, the lows dip and the high peaks has been exactly like a roller coaster. One can get really dizzy watching their book go up and down the chart.
Right now, it's on a down trend. I could be depressed, but after talking to Rick Chesler, I found out that the other two books in the series, Game of Drones and The Poseidon Initiative, have picked up some. We're thinking that people want to start with the first book in the series (Games of Drones), even though the books can be read in any order. It's natural people start with the first book and if they like it, read the second book and so on. I figure that later on, I will see an up-sweep in the rankings for African Firestorm.
So, what do I do now? Simple. Continue working on Red Ice, the next Outcast Ops novel I'm working on. Watching African Firestorm bounce up and down the ratings is wasting time. Will I ignore it? No, I'll check in on it a couple of times a day, and that will fade with one a day, then once every couple of days, until I check on it once in a while. Once Red Ice is written and up on Amazon, then I'll watch that for a while and so on. One novel does not win the war; while it would be great, I never expected African Firestorm to become a mega bestseller. But I did it once, I can do it again and again and again. That's the secret, going for a career of solid novels people want to read instead of trying for a one-hit wonder. That's a mindset that any author must have.
Now I need to get back to outline Red Ice.
Craig
The Kindle version of African Firestorm is here: African Firestorm for the Kindle
For the Nook version, go here: African Firestorm for the Nook.
Monday, April 27, 2015
The Weapons of African Firestorm --- Pt 2: Pistols
Pistols have a role in African Firestorm --- easy to conceal, better in tight quarters and easier to use in short ranges. Below are some of the weapons used in the novel.
TT-33 Tokarev
By Michael Tsay (Own work) [CC BY-SA 4.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
Country of origin: Russia
Caliber: 7.62x25mm Tokarev
Magazine: 8-round detachable box magazine
The Tokarev has been around since the 1930's, and like most Soviet-era arms, the pistol isn't pretty but is tough and does the job. It was replaced in the Soviet military by the Makarov pistol in the early 1950s, but is still manufactured in a number of countries under different designations, and is a common sidearm in Russian-supplied militaries, terrorists, and insurgent groups.
APB Machine Pistol
By Vitaly V. Kuzmin (Vitalykuzmin.net) [CC BY-SA 3.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
So, that's the pistols in African Firestorm. What do you think?
If you want the E-book, the Kindle version is here: African Firestorm For the Nook version, go here: African Firestorm for the Nook.
Craig
TT-33 Tokarev
By Michael Tsay (Own work) [CC BY-SA 4.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
Country of origin: Russia
Caliber: 7.62x25mm Tokarev
Magazine: 8-round detachable box magazine
Heckler and Koch SOCOM
By Joe Loong (Flickr) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
Country of origin: Germany
Caliber: .45 ACP
Magazine: 12- round detachable box magazine
Caliber: .45 ACP
Magazine: 12- round detachable box magazine
Officially known as the Heckler and Kock Mk 23, the pistol was adopted by SOCOM ( United States Special Operations Command) as the main pistol for the US Special forces in the 1990s. It is tough, reliable and the .45 caliber round is a heavy round. The .45 was originally chosen back in the early 1900s as a replacement for the .38 caliber round when the .38 proved unable to stop frenzied Moro tribesmen in the Philippines. The .45 caliber M1911 was the US Army's main sidearm for most of the Twentieth Century.
The SOOCOM version is designed to be used with a silencer and a laser aiming module,
Country of origin: Russia
Caliber: 9x18mm Makarov
Rate of fire: 750 rounds/min
Magazine: 20-round detachable box magazine
Rate of fire: 750 rounds/min
Magazine: 20-round detachable box magazine
The APB (Avtomaticheskij Pistolet Besshumnyj, Russian for "automatic silenced pistol") is a variant of the Stechkin automatic pistol (pictured above), It was used by the Soviet special forces in Afghanistan, and by Radio operators and heavy gun crews. The APB version comes with a silencer and a detectable steel-wire stock.
The most unusual thing about the APB and the Stechkin is that unlike most automatic pistols, the pistol has a full auto feature, allowing the user to fire bursts with one pull of the trigger, making it more like a submachine gun than a normal pistol.
The most unusual thing about the APB and the Stechkin is that unlike most automatic pistols, the pistol has a full auto feature, allowing the user to fire bursts with one pull of the trigger, making it more like a submachine gun than a normal pistol.
If you want the E-book, the Kindle version is here: African Firestorm For the Nook version, go here: African Firestorm for the Nook.
Saturday, April 25, 2015
The Weapons of African Firestorm --- Pt 1: Assault Rifles and Machine Guns
I decided that it would be a good thing if I gave some background on some of the weapons the characters used in Africa Firestorm, which will make it easier for you the reader to visualize when you read the novel. Today, it'll be the assault rifles and submachine guns. Before we start, a quick explanation of the difference between assault rifles and submachine guns.
The US Army Army intelligence document FSTC-CW-07-03-70 (November 1970) states: "Assault rifles are short, compact, selective-fire weapons that fire a cartridge intermediate in power between submachinegun and rifle cartridges." (page 67)
Merriam-Webster Dictionary defines a submachine gun as : "A portable automatic firearm that uses pistol-type ammunition and is fired from the shoulder or hip."
Assault rifles generally have larger bullets and longer range than a submachine gun, while submachines use pistol-caliber ammo.
Now, to the weapons:
Heckler and Koch MP5

"Heckler Koch MP5" by Daviddegelin at Dutch Wikipedia - Transferred from nl.wikipedia to Commons.. Licensed under Public Domain via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Heckler_Koch_MP5.jpg#/media/File:Heckler_Koch_MP5.jpg
Country of origin: Germany
Caliber: 9x19mm Parabellum
Rate of fire: 700 rounds/min (MP5SD series)
Magazine: 15- or 30- round detachable box magazine
The Heckler and Koch MP5 series of machine guns are used by a large number of special forces and police SWAT units. First designed and built in the mid 1960's, the MP5 has nearly thirty variants, depending on the stock type (fixed stock, retractable stock, no stock), barrel length, type of trigger setting (allowing the shooter to shoot either short bursts or go full auto), and caliber (there are a couple of models that are chambered for rounds other than 9mm. The MP5/10 is chambered for the 10mm rounds, while the MP5/40 is chambered for .40 S&W round).
The Outcast team uses the MP5SD3 version at the novel's climax, with a retractable buttstock, a "SEF" trigger group (Safe, semi-automatic and full automatic), and an integrated suppressor.
FN P90

"P90--" by dtic.mil - http://www.dtic.mil/ndia/2007smallarms/5_9_07/Armstrong_12pm.pdfhttp://www.dtic.mil/ndia/2007smallarms/2007smallarms.htmlhttp://www.dtic.mil/ndia/. Licensed under Public Domain via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:P90--.png#/media/File:P90--.png
Country of origin: Belgium
Caliber: 5.7x28mm
Rate of fire: 900 rounds/min
Magazine: 50- round detachable box magazine
Any fan of the TV show Stargate: SG-1 and Stargate Atlantis will recognize this weapon as the one used by the main characters in their adventures. Originally designated as a PDW (Personal Defense Weapon) for use by NATO crew-served weapons operators, support personnel, vehicle crews, special forces and counter-terrorist groups.It is now in use with over 40 countries, including the USA.
Considered a "Bullpup" design (The magazine is located behind the trigger housing), I chose this weapon for the team when three of them have to sneak into a warehouse to access a computer system. It's compact and easier to conceal than and MP5.
AK-47

"АК-47" by Allatur. Licensed under CC BY-SA 3.0 via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:%D0%90%D0%9A-47.jpg#/media/File:%D0%90%D0%9A-47.jpg
Country of origin: Russia
Caliber: 7.62x39mm
Rate of fire: 600 rounds/min
Magazine: 30- round detachable box magazine
Anyone who has watched a movie with a lot of gunfire has seen this weapon, usually in the hands of a bad guy. Created by Mikhail Kalashnikov, this weapon, also known as a Kalashnikov, is in use in over a hundred countries and by countless terrorist and rebel groups. In addition,over thirty countries manufacture their own version of this rifle, including China (Type 56) Bulgaria (Multiple variants) Finland ( Valmet M76), and Israel (Galil). Despite being superseded by more advanced Russian rifles (AK-74, AK-101/103), the AK-47's ruggedness has made it a staple all over the world.
One of the Places AK-47s can be found in abundance is in Africa. Somali pirates are usually armed with them.
CIS SAR-21

"SAR 21 RCF module" by Dave1185 at en.wikipedia. Licensed under CC BY 3.0 via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:SAR_21_RCF_module.jpg#/media/File:SAR_21_RCF_module.jpg
Country of origin: Singapore
Caliber: 5.56x45mm NATO
Rate of fire: 450-650 rounds/min
Magazine: 30- round detachable box magazine
This is African Firestorm's main bad guy's weapon. He doesn't actually use it, but he is carrying it through the novel as a symbol as his authority. Designed and built in Singapore for it's military, the SAR-21 is a bullpup design. In addition to Singapore, the SAR is being used by several other countries, mostly East Asian countries.
VEKTOR R-4
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"VektorR4" by User:Katangais - Own work. Licensed under CC BY 2.5 via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:VektorR4.png#/media/File:VektorR4.png
Country of origin: South Africa
Caliber: 5.56x45mm NATO
Rate of fire: 600-750 rounds/min
Magazine: 35- round detachable box magazine
There are few things new under the sun. The R-4 is a licensed copy of the Israeli Galil Assault Rifle, which itself is a variant of the AK-47. the R-4 is the main long arm of the South African Defense Force, while the R-5 (carbine version of the R-4) is popular with police and special response units.
This was the weapon of a minor bad guy group in the novel.
Well, I hope you enjoyed reading abut these weapons and hope the pictures help give you the right mental image of them when you read the novel. Next week, a look at the pistols in Africa Firestorm. If you want the E-book, the Kindle version is here: African Firestorm For the Nook version, go here: African Firestorm for the Nook.
Craig
The US Army Army intelligence document FSTC-CW-07-03-70 (November 1970) states: "Assault rifles are short, compact, selective-fire weapons that fire a cartridge intermediate in power between submachinegun and rifle cartridges." (page 67)
Merriam-Webster Dictionary defines a submachine gun as : "A portable automatic firearm that uses pistol-type ammunition and is fired from the shoulder or hip."
Assault rifles generally have larger bullets and longer range than a submachine gun, while submachines use pistol-caliber ammo.
Now, to the weapons:
Heckler and Koch MP5

"Heckler Koch MP5" by Daviddegelin at Dutch Wikipedia - Transferred from nl.wikipedia to Commons.. Licensed under Public Domain via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Heckler_Koch_MP5.jpg#/media/File:Heckler_Koch_MP5.jpg
Country of origin: Germany
Caliber: 9x19mm Parabellum
Rate of fire: 700 rounds/min (MP5SD series)
Magazine: 15- or 30- round detachable box magazine
The Heckler and Koch MP5 series of machine guns are used by a large number of special forces and police SWAT units. First designed and built in the mid 1960's, the MP5 has nearly thirty variants, depending on the stock type (fixed stock, retractable stock, no stock), barrel length, type of trigger setting (allowing the shooter to shoot either short bursts or go full auto), and caliber (there are a couple of models that are chambered for rounds other than 9mm. The MP5/10 is chambered for the 10mm rounds, while the MP5/40 is chambered for .40 S&W round).
The Outcast team uses the MP5SD3 version at the novel's climax, with a retractable buttstock, a "SEF" trigger group (Safe, semi-automatic and full automatic), and an integrated suppressor.
FN P90

"P90--" by dtic.mil - http://www.dtic.mil/ndia/2007smallarms/5_9_07/Armstrong_12pm.pdfhttp://www.dtic.mil/ndia/2007smallarms/2007smallarms.htmlhttp://www.dtic.mil/ndia/. Licensed under Public Domain via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:P90--.png#/media/File:P90--.png
Country of origin: Belgium
Caliber: 5.7x28mm
Rate of fire: 900 rounds/min
Magazine: 50- round detachable box magazine
Any fan of the TV show Stargate: SG-1 and Stargate Atlantis will recognize this weapon as the one used by the main characters in their adventures. Originally designated as a PDW (Personal Defense Weapon) for use by NATO crew-served weapons operators, support personnel, vehicle crews, special forces and counter-terrorist groups.It is now in use with over 40 countries, including the USA.
Considered a "Bullpup" design (The magazine is located behind the trigger housing), I chose this weapon for the team when three of them have to sneak into a warehouse to access a computer system. It's compact and easier to conceal than and MP5.
AK-47

"АК-47" by Allatur. Licensed under CC BY-SA 3.0 via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:%D0%90%D0%9A-47.jpg#/media/File:%D0%90%D0%9A-47.jpg
Country of origin: Russia
Caliber: 7.62x39mm
Rate of fire: 600 rounds/min
Magazine: 30- round detachable box magazine
Anyone who has watched a movie with a lot of gunfire has seen this weapon, usually in the hands of a bad guy. Created by Mikhail Kalashnikov, this weapon, also known as a Kalashnikov, is in use in over a hundred countries and by countless terrorist and rebel groups. In addition,over thirty countries manufacture their own version of this rifle, including China (Type 56) Bulgaria (Multiple variants) Finland ( Valmet M76), and Israel (Galil). Despite being superseded by more advanced Russian rifles (AK-74, AK-101/103), the AK-47's ruggedness has made it a staple all over the world.
One of the Places AK-47s can be found in abundance is in Africa. Somali pirates are usually armed with them.
CIS SAR-21

"SAR 21 RCF module" by Dave1185 at en.wikipedia. Licensed under CC BY 3.0 via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:SAR_21_RCF_module.jpg#/media/File:SAR_21_RCF_module.jpg
Country of origin: Singapore
Caliber: 5.56x45mm NATO
Rate of fire: 450-650 rounds/min
Magazine: 30- round detachable box magazine
This is African Firestorm's main bad guy's weapon. He doesn't actually use it, but he is carrying it through the novel as a symbol as his authority. Designed and built in Singapore for it's military, the SAR-21 is a bullpup design. In addition to Singapore, the SAR is being used by several other countries, mostly East Asian countries.
VEKTOR R-4
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"VektorR4" by User:Katangais - Own work. Licensed under CC BY 2.5 via Wikimedia Commons - http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:VektorR4.png#/media/File:VektorR4.png
Country of origin: South Africa
Caliber: 5.56x45mm NATO
Rate of fire: 600-750 rounds/min
Magazine: 35- round detachable box magazine
There are few things new under the sun. The R-4 is a licensed copy of the Israeli Galil Assault Rifle, which itself is a variant of the AK-47. the R-4 is the main long arm of the South African Defense Force, while the R-5 (carbine version of the R-4) is popular with police and special response units.
This was the weapon of a minor bad guy group in the novel.
Well, I hope you enjoyed reading abut these weapons and hope the pictures help give you the right mental image of them when you read the novel. Next week, a look at the pistols in Africa Firestorm. If you want the E-book, the Kindle version is here: African Firestorm For the Nook version, go here: African Firestorm for the Nook.
Craig
Wednesday, April 22, 2015
What goes into a Novel?

African Firestorm started off as one story, but changed as I write the outline and when I actually started writing. Rick Chesler supplied the basic idea, that of Somali pirates. But as I researched, I saw that for the most part, Somali pirates problem was over. I like the idea of using piracy in that part of the world, so I used it as a base of the story.
For the rest, I looked at what was going on in the world. The Iran nuclear situation, ISIS, and North Korea became pieces of the puzzle from the start, but as I wrote it, the original back half of the book wasn't working. I sat back, talked to Rick and we rethought the back half of the book. The original climax was a raid on a ship, followed by a second raid on a second ship. While it looked great in the outline, when it came to write it, it didn't jell. So, one ship boarding done away with. Then the original terrorist target also stopped working, so that was tossed and a new target found, one that made more sense and added a level of tension that wasn't there before.

Then it was figuring out what was the missiles range was, and how close the bad guys had to be to fire it. The range of F-18s as well as their speed at different altitudes. There was a neat scene about a pair of F-18s shattering a ship's windows with a point-blank sonic boom, only to find the Mythbusters beat me to it (and busted it), as well as realizing that such a stunt was stupid on a ship with AA missiles onboard. So, their role changed. I made sure the F-18 squadron was a real one based on a real aircraft carrier. I used Wikipedia extensively on a number of novel-related subjects.
I tried to make it realistic as I could, which is why I worried about missile ranges, F-18 capabilities, what ships were where, real locations for scenes, and the weapons the characters used. I watched videos on container ships, trying to get a look and feel what it would be like for the action on-board ship. Somali culture became part of the story, the use of Khat and the plight of the Somali people. Where I couldn't get a clear answer, I made one up. Where I won't say, but I hope it doesn't distract from your enjoyment of the novel. I know I have been rather vague, but I don't want to spoil the surprise!
The next Outcast Ops novel I'm working on, Red Ice, has the first thirty chapters outlined. A different style of story, it still have plenty of action. Hopefully, it will be out in the summer.
Later!
Craig
Monday, April 13, 2015
African Firestorm is a Go!
I apologize for ignoring this blog for so long, but the main reason is right above --- Outcast Ops: African Firestorm is now published!
You can find it here: Outcast Ops: African Firestorm And there are two other books in the series -- they can be found here: Outcast Ops series.
I must thank Rick Chesler for this opportunity. When I responded to his Facebook post asking for co-authors for this new series of his, I had no idea where this road would take me. He guided me, but let me take the story where it wanted to go, and it went in a couple of unexpected places. Thanks again, Rick.
It has been an eye-opening experience in writing this novel. I spent a lot of time pouring over Google maps, calculating speeds and locations, learning about khat, container ships, Somalia and missiles. I also learned something about writing, outlining, and how no writing plan survives contact with reality. This is my first novel and I am damn proud of it!
I'll be getting back to blogging regularly again and maybe give you a glimpse at the next Outcasts Ops novel I'm working on --- Outcast Ops: Red Ice. It's in the outline stage, but it's already looking like an action-packed story!
That's all for now!
Craig
Thursday, May 29, 2014
The Week Rolls On
The family member's doing a bit better, but their situation is still taking a chunk out of my writing time. It's not a complaint, but a statement of fact, and family has to help family, right?
But when I've had the time,I've made the most of it. African Firestorm is still moving along -- into Chapter 45 as plotted. But the way I'm writing this synopsis, it's possible that several of these chapters can be put together. Once I get it done, and send it to Rick, and see what he thinks about it.
I tend to write out scenes -- who did what, where and how. I prefer the detailed synopsis, as I've done all the hard work here, rather than in the actual writing. If I know Character A shots Character B, and Character B goes over the rail and into shark infested waters, it's all a matter of plugging in the details -- the ship, what lighting there is, the characters' moods, the backdrop, and maybe even the type of guns the characters are using. It's all adding color and texture to the paragraph:
"A pursues B onto the deck. At the rail, B spins around, gun in hand. A tells B to give up. B snarls and raises his gun. A is faster and shoots B. The impacts knock B back against the rail, and he over-balances. B flips over the rail and falls into the water below. A runs to the rail and sees sharks closing in on the stunned B."
That's the way I'm writing the synopsis, only with character names instead of A and B.
As an aside, I cannot find a book of surnames. I can find name books covering thousands of names for baby and characters, but surnames seem to be scattered across the Internet. I've started keeping a spreadsheet of surnames, culled from every source I can think of. Right now, it's in alphabetical order, and it's going to be problematic when it comes to separating them back out into their origin country's. Still, I have over 14,500 surnames on the spreadsheet and some interesting stats, Once I hit 15,000 surnames, I'll write a post on that,
On the Battlecorp front, the stories are still going, moving toward their climaxes. If my luck holds, they should be done (First draft anyway) in mid-June. At which point I start three more stories and let those three sit for a while.
So, that's it. Despite real life, I'm still writing when I can. Hopefully, there will be some resolution of the family matter by the weekend and life will become "Normal" again.....
Craig
But when I've had the time,I've made the most of it. African Firestorm is still moving along -- into Chapter 45 as plotted. But the way I'm writing this synopsis, it's possible that several of these chapters can be put together. Once I get it done, and send it to Rick, and see what he thinks about it.
I tend to write out scenes -- who did what, where and how. I prefer the detailed synopsis, as I've done all the hard work here, rather than in the actual writing. If I know Character A shots Character B, and Character B goes over the rail and into shark infested waters, it's all a matter of plugging in the details -- the ship, what lighting there is, the characters' moods, the backdrop, and maybe even the type of guns the characters are using. It's all adding color and texture to the paragraph:
"A pursues B onto the deck. At the rail, B spins around, gun in hand. A tells B to give up. B snarls and raises his gun. A is faster and shoots B. The impacts knock B back against the rail, and he over-balances. B flips over the rail and falls into the water below. A runs to the rail and sees sharks closing in on the stunned B."
That's the way I'm writing the synopsis, only with character names instead of A and B.
As an aside, I cannot find a book of surnames. I can find name books covering thousands of names for baby and characters, but surnames seem to be scattered across the Internet. I've started keeping a spreadsheet of surnames, culled from every source I can think of. Right now, it's in alphabetical order, and it's going to be problematic when it comes to separating them back out into their origin country's. Still, I have over 14,500 surnames on the spreadsheet and some interesting stats, Once I hit 15,000 surnames, I'll write a post on that,
On the Battlecorp front, the stories are still going, moving toward their climaxes. If my luck holds, they should be done (First draft anyway) in mid-June. At which point I start three more stories and let those three sit for a while.
So, that's it. Despite real life, I'm still writing when I can. Hopefully, there will be some resolution of the family matter by the weekend and life will become "Normal" again.....
Craig
Monday, May 26, 2014
Hoping for a Better Week
The family member's incapacitation is looking to be a long-term affair, but things are beginning to settle down to a slightly less disruptive level, and I hope to put in some more words into the stories I'm working on.
Still, I've managed to push all three Battlecorps stories to the 6,000 word mark, and push African Firestorm outline a few hundred words closer to the finish line. With the first OUTCAST Ops novel, Game of Drones, out and doing well, that mean I have to work harder at getting it finished and bounced back to Rick for his workover.
For those who still think the TPBs are the only way to go, I suggest you take a look at this: http://authorearnings.com/the-tenured-vs-debut-author-report/ It's a sobering look at the current state of the industry and how it's changing.
For those who missed it, there's a confrontation between Amazon and Hachette, resulting in both sides digging in and no books from Hachette being sold on Amazon. Here, JA Konrath takes apart the arguments that both Scott Turow and James Patterson make in support of Hachette. http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2014/05/turow-patterson-plateful-of-fail-with.html Warning, Mr. Konrath doesn't pull his punches and I'm fairly sure he'd wearing steel-toed boots.
All I can say is before signing anything from a publisher or agent, THINK. Then think about it some more. You may be better off publishing it yourself.....
And again, Game of Drones is out and here's the link: http://www.amazon.com/O-U-T-C-S-T-Ops-Game-Drones-ebook/dp/B00KH11U4M/ref=sr_1_2?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1400686346&sr=1-2&keywords=game+of+drones
Later!
Craig
Still, I've managed to push all three Battlecorps stories to the 6,000 word mark, and push African Firestorm outline a few hundred words closer to the finish line. With the first OUTCAST Ops novel, Game of Drones, out and doing well, that mean I have to work harder at getting it finished and bounced back to Rick for his workover.
For those who still think the TPBs are the only way to go, I suggest you take a look at this: http://authorearnings.com/the-tenured-vs-debut-author-report/ It's a sobering look at the current state of the industry and how it's changing.
For those who missed it, there's a confrontation between Amazon and Hachette, resulting in both sides digging in and no books from Hachette being sold on Amazon. Here, JA Konrath takes apart the arguments that both Scott Turow and James Patterson make in support of Hachette. http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2014/05/turow-patterson-plateful-of-fail-with.html Warning, Mr. Konrath doesn't pull his punches and I'm fairly sure he'd wearing steel-toed boots.
All I can say is before signing anything from a publisher or agent, THINK. Then think about it some more. You may be better off publishing it yourself.....
And again, Game of Drones is out and here's the link: http://www.amazon.com/O-U-T-C-S-T-Ops-Game-Drones-ebook/dp/B00KH11U4M/ref=sr_1_2?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1400686346&sr=1-2&keywords=game+of+drones
Later!
Craig
Wednesday, May 21, 2014
Bad Week
I wish I had a bunch of good news telling what I was doing writing-wise, but we found out that a family member has became incapacitated Sunday afternoon, and that has thrown out most of my writing time the last several days. It's also thrown my blog writing out the window, which is why this is two days late this week. I won't say much more about the situation, only to add that my family is focusing on the family member above anything else.
What little time I have managed to write has allowed me to forget about the situation and managed to make small gains across the board, But it will be a couple of days before I can really crack down on the writing. But when I do get the chance, I will take and run as much as I can. What writing I have managed to do is going well and I hope to get a major jump on it this weekend.
Also, I will mention that the first OUTCAST Ops novel is out!
What little time I have managed to write has allowed me to forget about the situation and managed to make small gains across the board, But it will be a couple of days before I can really crack down on the writing. But when I do get the chance, I will take and run as much as I can. What writing I have managed to do is going well and I hope to get a major jump on it this weekend.
Also, I will mention that the first OUTCAST Ops novel is out!
http://www.amazon.com/O-U-T-C-S-T-Ops-Game-Drones-ebook/dp/B00KH11U4M/ref=sr_1_2?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1400686346&sr=1-2&keywords=game+of+drones
This is the series that African Firestorm will be part of. Pick up a copy and see what you think!
Now, I need to go do some writing....
Craig
Thursday, May 15, 2014
The Importance of Pre-Work Before Writing
Well, it's better than saying "Update" again, isn't it? (Where's the emoticons when you need them? I need a grin that looks better than :D)
FINALLY got that problem with African Firestorm figured out and that's back on track. Which leads me to what I call "Pre-work."
Don't bother looking for the term, because its one I use to describe what goes into writing a story before I even start. The research, thinking out the basic story, deciding on what elements to include, how the characters should be (in general) and so on. Some people like to write it all down and some just keep it in their minds. I fall into the last group but try to make it up with the summery.
I find that I work best when I write detailed summaries what happens in every section of the book. That allows me to get the chapters laid out, make sure I include everything i need to. When I'm done, I can read it over and make sure I have everything,
I am not a compulsive note taker, and for most of my short stories, write by the seat of my pants. I'm getting better at actually thinking stories through before committing them to screen, but I'm not there yet.
For for a real novel that isn't fanfiction (I've done a couple of those, look for me on Mediaminer.com under trboturtle and you'll find them), pantsing it isn't going to work. For one, I'm not the only writer on this novel. Rick Chesler's the man who came up with Outcast Ops, and he's the one who has to fix my screw-ups and my meandering. I'd rather not have him working overtime on what should be him just rewriting enough to make sure it flows with the other OO novels.
For another, people are going to be reading it, looking for some good adventure, not a rambling stumbling pile of story. That means working out any and all major story points before tapping away at the keyboard, to try and avoid all that.
And as I just found out, writing myself into a corner is a lot easier to correct when it's only a summery, as opposed to be writing the scene out. I figure that I'm going to have to add another two chapters, move Chapter 42 back to Chapter 44, and rewrite it to reflect the new situation, The summery is a lot easier to rewrite and adjust than a full blown novel. The more solid everything is before starting, the easier (in theory) the writing will be.
So, take it from someone who's learning the hard way, be sure of the story, then write. I'm use to write then find the story in the words already written. We'll see how it goes......
Later!
Craig
FINALLY got that problem with African Firestorm figured out and that's back on track. Which leads me to what I call "Pre-work."
Don't bother looking for the term, because its one I use to describe what goes into writing a story before I even start. The research, thinking out the basic story, deciding on what elements to include, how the characters should be (in general) and so on. Some people like to write it all down and some just keep it in their minds. I fall into the last group but try to make it up with the summery.
I find that I work best when I write detailed summaries what happens in every section of the book. That allows me to get the chapters laid out, make sure I include everything i need to. When I'm done, I can read it over and make sure I have everything,
I am not a compulsive note taker, and for most of my short stories, write by the seat of my pants. I'm getting better at actually thinking stories through before committing them to screen, but I'm not there yet.
For for a real novel that isn't fanfiction (I've done a couple of those, look for me on Mediaminer.com under trboturtle and you'll find them), pantsing it isn't going to work. For one, I'm not the only writer on this novel. Rick Chesler's the man who came up with Outcast Ops, and he's the one who has to fix my screw-ups and my meandering. I'd rather not have him working overtime on what should be him just rewriting enough to make sure it flows with the other OO novels.
For another, people are going to be reading it, looking for some good adventure, not a rambling stumbling pile of story. That means working out any and all major story points before tapping away at the keyboard, to try and avoid all that.
And as I just found out, writing myself into a corner is a lot easier to correct when it's only a summery, as opposed to be writing the scene out. I figure that I'm going to have to add another two chapters, move Chapter 42 back to Chapter 44, and rewrite it to reflect the new situation, The summery is a lot easier to rewrite and adjust than a full blown novel. The more solid everything is before starting, the easier (in theory) the writing will be.
So, take it from someone who's learning the hard way, be sure of the story, then write. I'm use to write then find the story in the words already written. We'll see how it goes......
Later!
Craig
Monday, May 12, 2014
Research and African Firestorm
I made this time around....
All writing full speed ahead. All Battlecorps stories are @ 5,000 words. The Valiant RPG extra writing is going well, and I'm fining my groove there. The African Firestorm will have to have the last couple of chapters rewritten, to reflect the research I have been doing. Nothing major, but it's taking a little thought. It's more changing a few things and pushing the arrival of the bad guys back than a major rewrite, so it should be done this week and I can move onto the climax.
I talked about research, and I am finding that it's a lot more intense than I expected. That's good, because I love to look things up, but sooner or later, the story has to be written. But the different subjects I touch on in this story is varies from countries, languages, weapons, and cultures. Science Fiction off-planet is easier, as in space, the culture can be anything you want it to be. Same with a lot of fantasy stories. It's wordbuilding in its purest form.
But African Firestorm is a modern-day thriller, which mean making sure the real world details I include are the right details. Yes, the plot is fiction, but realism helps sell the fiction. If the bad guy fires an AK-47, I, as a write have to know something about the weapon in question, even if only ten percent of the knowledge ever reaches the paper. I have to supply enough information so the reader knows the situation is plausible, while at the same time, avoiding an info dump that stops the story in its tracks and gives the reader useless information. Using the AK-47 as an example, I may mention the rifle fires a 7.62mm round and it's a common weapon in most parts of the world, but I can't spend three sentences or an entire paragraph explaining its history or the local variants from around the world.
If my bad guys are a special forces unit from a hostile country, I have to have the right weapons for them to use. The vehicles used have to be the right type for that area, and any sea vessels have to be researched enough to fit the story.
Am I over-researching? Probably, but this is a chance to write a type of story I've always wanted to write, so best to over research then do none and leave the reader wondering if I was too lazy to go look for the information.
That's all for now.
Craig
All writing full speed ahead. All Battlecorps stories are @ 5,000 words. The Valiant RPG extra writing is going well, and I'm fining my groove there. The African Firestorm will have to have the last couple of chapters rewritten, to reflect the research I have been doing. Nothing major, but it's taking a little thought. It's more changing a few things and pushing the arrival of the bad guys back than a major rewrite, so it should be done this week and I can move onto the climax.
I talked about research, and I am finding that it's a lot more intense than I expected. That's good, because I love to look things up, but sooner or later, the story has to be written. But the different subjects I touch on in this story is varies from countries, languages, weapons, and cultures. Science Fiction off-planet is easier, as in space, the culture can be anything you want it to be. Same with a lot of fantasy stories. It's wordbuilding in its purest form.
But African Firestorm is a modern-day thriller, which mean making sure the real world details I include are the right details. Yes, the plot is fiction, but realism helps sell the fiction. If the bad guy fires an AK-47, I, as a write have to know something about the weapon in question, even if only ten percent of the knowledge ever reaches the paper. I have to supply enough information so the reader knows the situation is plausible, while at the same time, avoiding an info dump that stops the story in its tracks and gives the reader useless information. Using the AK-47 as an example, I may mention the rifle fires a 7.62mm round and it's a common weapon in most parts of the world, but I can't spend three sentences or an entire paragraph explaining its history or the local variants from around the world.
If my bad guys are a special forces unit from a hostile country, I have to have the right weapons for them to use. The vehicles used have to be the right type for that area, and any sea vessels have to be researched enough to fit the story.
Am I over-researching? Probably, but this is a chance to write a type of story I've always wanted to write, so best to over research then do none and leave the reader wondering if I was too lazy to go look for the information.
That's all for now.
Craig
Tuesday, May 6, 2014
Late (and Short) Update
I know this blog entry is late AGAIN. Sometimes it isn't easy to come up with something. I need to dig into my stack of saved web pages and see if I can find anything useful among them.
African Firestorm is still going through the outline stage and is into Chapter 41, but I'm at the point that I'm working out the steps in a gun battle, and I can't find any good deck plans of a container ship (Were said gun battle is taking place), so I don't know how one of these ships is laid out. If anyone knows of such plans on-line, or has access to a set of Deck plans of a large container ship in an electronic form, I would be most grateful.
Got a first glimpse of the first Outcast Ops novel draft, Game of Drones. I need to sit down and read through it, but from what little I've read, this s going to be an interesting series to write for. If anyone wants to kept in the lop abut the series, and get links to some interesting articles that kind of set the stage for the series, you can follow @OutcastOps.
The Battletech writing is going well, and I finished that additional writing for the Valiant RPG and turned that in. So things are going okay so far.
Later!
Craig
African Firestorm is still going through the outline stage and is into Chapter 41, but I'm at the point that I'm working out the steps in a gun battle, and I can't find any good deck plans of a container ship (Were said gun battle is taking place), so I don't know how one of these ships is laid out. If anyone knows of such plans on-line, or has access to a set of Deck plans of a large container ship in an electronic form, I would be most grateful.
Got a first glimpse of the first Outcast Ops novel draft, Game of Drones. I need to sit down and read through it, but from what little I've read, this s going to be an interesting series to write for. If anyone wants to kept in the lop abut the series, and get links to some interesting articles that kind of set the stage for the series, you can follow @OutcastOps.
The Battletech writing is going well, and I finished that additional writing for the Valiant RPG and turned that in. So things are going okay so far.
Later!
Craig
Thursday, April 24, 2014
Merlin's Legacy, Chapter 7, part 2
The writing still going strong --- All three short stories are over 2,000 words, while the African Firestorm outline is close to 12,000 words. Talked to Rick Chesler, and OUTCAST OPS has it's own twitter feed at @OutcastOps. I'll keep you updated on the progress of the novel.
And now, some more of Merlin's Legacy, the rest of Chapter 7:
The darkness lasted only a couple of seconds before I found myself in a large stone chamber larger than the library. The floor, walls and ceiling were all made from squared-off stone blocks. Several corridors lead out of the room, to where, I had no idea. “What is this place?”
“It really has no official name,” Cachmawri said. “We called it the Sanctum.”
I walked into the center of the room and did a slow circle. A quarter of the chamber was another library, with chairs, bookcases, and a large reading table. Another quarter was a lab of some sort, with a workbench, beakers and other equipment I didn't recognized. The third quarter looked to be a museum, with display cases holding objects. The other quarter looked like a storage area, a refrigerator, cabinets and set of drawers centered around another large table. The way we’d come had a dark doorway.
“How?” I asked. “There is no way all this can be hidden behind the library wall!”
“It isn't,” Lucian said, walking into the chamber. “We are standing inside a pocket dimension, first created by Merlin himself, and used by each succeeding generation. It is a warehouse, a training area, a laboratory and a refuge. Here, you can learn how to be a wizard.”
“How big is this place?”
“I really don’t know. I never fully explored this place.”
“Never?”
Lucian shook his head. “Didn’t have the time.”
The throbbing in my head got worse, and I started rubbing my temples again.
“Head hurts?” he asked.
“Yeah,” I replied.
Lucian motioned toward a cabinet near the doorway in the storage area. "Top shelf, round bottle with white egg-shaped pills in it. Please get it.”
The cabinet was unlocked and I found the bottle with no problem. I brought over to Lucian. “These?” I asked.
“Yes. Take two of those. There’s bottled water in the refrigerator.”
The refrigerator was well stocked with food and liquids, but I just grabbed a bottle of water and used it to wash down the two pills. Almost at once, the throbbing lessened. “Wow,” I said.
“Feel better?” Cachmawri asked.
“Yes.”
“Good. I’ll show you some of the features of the Sanctum.”
We spent an hour and a quarter going through the Sanctum. The corridors were built just like the main chamber, all stone, with iron-shod wooden doors leading to different rooms. I saw training halls, both for martial arts and Magus Artificium (Magical arts). There were storerooms, an Alchemy lab, a full kitchen, several bedrooms, an Olympic swimming pool (with changing rooms), and even a hot spring, One room had nothing but a large metal ring set into the chamber floor, surrounded by engravings of different symbols like the ones I saw on Lucian’s tomb.
This place was huge, easily twice the size of the main house, which was large to begin with. There were stairs and other corridors leading to other parts of the structure we didn't explore.
By the time we returned to the main room, I was suitable impressed with the Sanctum. Lucian had stayed in the main hall, and was waiting for us when we came back. “Well?”
“Just like the TARDIS,” I said.
“Tardis?” Cachmawri asked.
“It’s from a science fiction TV show,” Lucian said “A spaceship that is bigger on the inside than the outside.”
“Ah. I need to check on a couple of things.” Cachmawri quick-stepped out the doorway leading to the library.
“What do you think of this place?” Lucian asked me.
“Very nice,” I said.
Lucian motioned to a chair in the library quarter. “Please, sit.”
I went over and sat down. Lucian stood behind another chair. “I know I’m dumping a lot on you all of a sudden,” he said. “And for that, I am sorry. Cachmawri wanted me to bring you up here after you graduated high school and make you my apprentice, but I vetoed the idea.”
“Why?”
“Because I didn't want you to be subjugated to the same life I was. My father, Quinton Merlin started training me in the Magus Artificium when I was twelve years old. I trained twelve hours a day, six days a week. And if my father wasn't home, Cachmawri would trained me. I had no friends, no social life, nothing but the training and the family.”
“Did Grandpa know?”
Lucian shook his head. “Sam knew something was wrong, but didn't know about the training or anything about magic. In any case, he knew that he couldn't stand up to our father. Quinton Merlin was very set in his beliefs, and had a very black and white view of the world.”
“He doesn't sound like a nice man.”
“Actually, he was a very loving, but stern, man. He and my mother raised all four of us with love and a disciplined work ethic. The only area in which my father was hard on me was in my training as the next Merlin’s Heir, and in that, he as unforgiving.”
“You didn't want to train me in the same way.”
In part,” he replied. “But I've also seen many things over the years I wish I hadn’t, the horrors outweighing the few things of wonder. I didn't think I had the right to expose anyone else to it.”
“But you should had contacted me and asked!” I said, standing up. “I could have come up here during the summer and trained. If being Merlin’s Heir is as important as you say it is, then doesn't stand to reason that a half-trained replacement would have been better than an untrained one?”
Lucian gave me a sad smile. “Would you have said yes?”
I stopped for a moment. “Maybe,”I replied. “But you could have exposed me slower to the idea of magic. Instead, I being deluged with all this stuff in a short period of time and I’m feeling overwhelmed.”
“I’m sorry, Roger,” Lucian said. “I guess I was alone too long. That’s another reason why I didn't pull you into this life earlier. Being the Heir can be so lonely, and it can destroy relationships. It also consumes you life on a scale that few other roles demand. I didn't want you to be condemned to an entire lifetime of that.”
“What about the next generation?” I asked. “Assuming a child is born into the family with this Magus Sensus in the next several years, what then? Would you delay bring them into the fold and risk there being no Merlin’s Heir?”
“Roger, I—”
“Lucian, please,” I said sharply. I then took a deep breath and said, “I could yell and scream for the next two days, but that isn't going to change anything. Grandpa said more than once that screaming about what life dealt you is a waste of time and energy. Best to use that time and energy into getting out what life tossed you into.”
“Sam was always a bit blunt. Took after our mother in that way.”
I took a deep breath. “The thugs at the tomb weren't the first time I was attacked. I was attacked last week, in my apartment, by the same guys. They wanted the letter Charlie Windiciott sent me, only I hadn't received it yet. It would be one hell of a coincident if your murder and the attacks on me weren't related. Charlie Windicott also told me that his files were broken into the night of your murder and his letter was delayed until his files were sorted out.”
“A reasonable assumption.”
“In that vein, they’re not going to stop just because I inherit. And if Merlin’s Heir is that scary to them, they might up the ante.”
“Magic?”
I nodded. “The hooded creep didn't pull that appearing and disappearing trick with smoke and mirrors. And if they start flinging around magic, people could get hurt. It stands to reason that the best way to fight magic is magic.”
A gong started up, and a female voice said, “Attention. There are intruders on the estate’s grounds. There are intruders on the estate grounds.”
And now, some more of Merlin's Legacy, the rest of Chapter 7:
***
The darkness lasted only a couple of seconds before I found myself in a large stone chamber larger than the library. The floor, walls and ceiling were all made from squared-off stone blocks. Several corridors lead out of the room, to where, I had no idea. “What is this place?”
“It really has no official name,” Cachmawri said. “We called it the Sanctum.”
I walked into the center of the room and did a slow circle. A quarter of the chamber was another library, with chairs, bookcases, and a large reading table. Another quarter was a lab of some sort, with a workbench, beakers and other equipment I didn't recognized. The third quarter looked to be a museum, with display cases holding objects. The other quarter looked like a storage area, a refrigerator, cabinets and set of drawers centered around another large table. The way we’d come had a dark doorway.
“How?” I asked. “There is no way all this can be hidden behind the library wall!”
“It isn't,” Lucian said, walking into the chamber. “We are standing inside a pocket dimension, first created by Merlin himself, and used by each succeeding generation. It is a warehouse, a training area, a laboratory and a refuge. Here, you can learn how to be a wizard.”
“How big is this place?”
“I really don’t know. I never fully explored this place.”
“Never?”
Lucian shook his head. “Didn’t have the time.”
The throbbing in my head got worse, and I started rubbing my temples again.
“Head hurts?” he asked.
“Yeah,” I replied.
Lucian motioned toward a cabinet near the doorway in the storage area. "Top shelf, round bottle with white egg-shaped pills in it. Please get it.”
The cabinet was unlocked and I found the bottle with no problem. I brought over to Lucian. “These?” I asked.
“Yes. Take two of those. There’s bottled water in the refrigerator.”
The refrigerator was well stocked with food and liquids, but I just grabbed a bottle of water and used it to wash down the two pills. Almost at once, the throbbing lessened. “Wow,” I said.
“Feel better?” Cachmawri asked.
“Yes.”
“Good. I’ll show you some of the features of the Sanctum.”
We spent an hour and a quarter going through the Sanctum. The corridors were built just like the main chamber, all stone, with iron-shod wooden doors leading to different rooms. I saw training halls, both for martial arts and Magus Artificium (Magical arts). There were storerooms, an Alchemy lab, a full kitchen, several bedrooms, an Olympic swimming pool (with changing rooms), and even a hot spring, One room had nothing but a large metal ring set into the chamber floor, surrounded by engravings of different symbols like the ones I saw on Lucian’s tomb.
This place was huge, easily twice the size of the main house, which was large to begin with. There were stairs and other corridors leading to other parts of the structure we didn't explore.
By the time we returned to the main room, I was suitable impressed with the Sanctum. Lucian had stayed in the main hall, and was waiting for us when we came back. “Well?”
“Just like the TARDIS,” I said.
“Tardis?” Cachmawri asked.
“It’s from a science fiction TV show,” Lucian said “A spaceship that is bigger on the inside than the outside.”
“Ah. I need to check on a couple of things.” Cachmawri quick-stepped out the doorway leading to the library.
“What do you think of this place?” Lucian asked me.
“Very nice,” I said.
Lucian motioned to a chair in the library quarter. “Please, sit.”
I went over and sat down. Lucian stood behind another chair. “I know I’m dumping a lot on you all of a sudden,” he said. “And for that, I am sorry. Cachmawri wanted me to bring you up here after you graduated high school and make you my apprentice, but I vetoed the idea.”
“Why?”
“Because I didn't want you to be subjugated to the same life I was. My father, Quinton Merlin started training me in the Magus Artificium when I was twelve years old. I trained twelve hours a day, six days a week. And if my father wasn't home, Cachmawri would trained me. I had no friends, no social life, nothing but the training and the family.”
“Did Grandpa know?”
Lucian shook his head. “Sam knew something was wrong, but didn't know about the training or anything about magic. In any case, he knew that he couldn't stand up to our father. Quinton Merlin was very set in his beliefs, and had a very black and white view of the world.”
“He doesn't sound like a nice man.”
“Actually, he was a very loving, but stern, man. He and my mother raised all four of us with love and a disciplined work ethic. The only area in which my father was hard on me was in my training as the next Merlin’s Heir, and in that, he as unforgiving.”
“You didn't want to train me in the same way.”
In part,” he replied. “But I've also seen many things over the years I wish I hadn’t, the horrors outweighing the few things of wonder. I didn't think I had the right to expose anyone else to it.”
“But you should had contacted me and asked!” I said, standing up. “I could have come up here during the summer and trained. If being Merlin’s Heir is as important as you say it is, then doesn't stand to reason that a half-trained replacement would have been better than an untrained one?”
Lucian gave me a sad smile. “Would you have said yes?”
I stopped for a moment. “Maybe,”I replied. “But you could have exposed me slower to the idea of magic. Instead, I being deluged with all this stuff in a short period of time and I’m feeling overwhelmed.”
“I’m sorry, Roger,” Lucian said. “I guess I was alone too long. That’s another reason why I didn't pull you into this life earlier. Being the Heir can be so lonely, and it can destroy relationships. It also consumes you life on a scale that few other roles demand. I didn't want you to be condemned to an entire lifetime of that.”
“What about the next generation?” I asked. “Assuming a child is born into the family with this Magus Sensus in the next several years, what then? Would you delay bring them into the fold and risk there being no Merlin’s Heir?”
“Roger, I—”
“Lucian, please,” I said sharply. I then took a deep breath and said, “I could yell and scream for the next two days, but that isn't going to change anything. Grandpa said more than once that screaming about what life dealt you is a waste of time and energy. Best to use that time and energy into getting out what life tossed you into.”
“Sam was always a bit blunt. Took after our mother in that way.”
I took a deep breath. “The thugs at the tomb weren't the first time I was attacked. I was attacked last week, in my apartment, by the same guys. They wanted the letter Charlie Windiciott sent me, only I hadn't received it yet. It would be one hell of a coincident if your murder and the attacks on me weren't related. Charlie Windicott also told me that his files were broken into the night of your murder and his letter was delayed until his files were sorted out.”
“A reasonable assumption.”
“In that vein, they’re not going to stop just because I inherit. And if Merlin’s Heir is that scary to them, they might up the ante.”
“Magic?”
I nodded. “The hooded creep didn't pull that appearing and disappearing trick with smoke and mirrors. And if they start flinging around magic, people could get hurt. It stands to reason that the best way to fight magic is magic.”
A gong started up, and a female voice said, “Attention. There are intruders on the estate’s grounds. There are intruders on the estate grounds.”
***
Tuesday, April 22, 2014
Merlin's Legacy and a Late Update
Well, I missed another Monday....
On the writing front, the African Firestorm outline is over 11,000 and complete up to Chapter 38, heading into Chapter 39. I'm beginning to see the end, but the climax is going to tricky to write, as I have to wrap all the threads together to complete the story. I know how the story ends --- I just need to get it there....
The Battletech stories are going well, I'll update them in my Battletech blog (http://thebattletechstate.blogspot.com/). Just suffice it to say, they are going well.
And I've decided to go a little bit farther in bringing the first draft of Merlin's Legacy to you, the reader. Here is part one of Chapter 7:
I don’t know how long I laid there like a stunned fish, but when my senses started working again, I heard voices. One was the cat’s, while the other I vaguely recognized.
“It’s tradition!” the cat was saying.
“The situation is different,” the second voice said.
“Are you sure he’s the one?”
“You didn’t see him when those thugs attacked him. He used the energy powering the wards around my tomb and channeled it through him with only a little help from me. And that was with his Magus Sensus blocked.”
“But he has so much to learn!”
“And that is my fault, old friend. But he will learn for you.”
“You should have brought him in sooner.”
The second voice sighed. “I’ve already said it’s my fault. But the point is moot. And Roger has recovered.”
I groaned and sat up. “What’s going on?” I asked.
“That is my fault, I’m afraid.”
I looked up and found myself staring up at the mirror image of the painting of the library. He was wearing the bomber jacket, military trousers, and boots. I glanced at his hand and the dragon ring was there. “Uncle Lucian?”
“Hello, Roger,” Lucian said, smiling at me. “Sorry about this, but it’s time you and I had a talk.”
“But you’re dead!”
“That’s one of the things we have to talk about. I have an offer for you, one that will change your life.”
“What?”
Lucian sighed. “Get up and we can continue this in the library.”
I got up slowly. “But you’re dead!”
“Yes, I know.”
“But you’re here! And young!”
“I’m here, yes, but I’m dead, and I’m a ghost.”
I was on my feet now and looking at him. “But I can see you!”
“Try touching me.”
I reached out had tried to put my hand on his chest, only to have my hand pass through his body. I pulled my hand back and tried again, with the same result. I pulled my hand and looked at it. “I must be dreaming,” I muttered
Sharp pain lanced through my left calf as if someone had pressed a nail against it. I yelped and hopped back.
Lucian looked down. “That wasn’t very nice, Cachmawri,” he said in a disapproving tone.
“We don’t have time for him to work through his disbelief,” the cat replied, walking past me and into the library. “There’s a lot he needs to know and only a little time to explain it in.”
Lucian nodded. “He’s right. We need to move this along.”
I walked into the library. Cach was sitting on a chair. He raised a paw and pointed at a nearby chair. “Sit.”
I sat.
Lucian walked over to stand near the fireplace. He stared into the fire for a few seconds. “Roger,” he said. “Have you ever thought about our last name?”
“Merlin?” I shrugged. “I got teased about it for a few years, but no, not really.”
“What would you say if I told you that Merlin of the Arthurian legends was a real person, and you are his decedent?”
I blinked at him. “Okay.”
“You accept that?”
“I’m talking to a ghost and a cat and not freaking out.”
Lucian smiled, making him look younger. “Good.” He looked over at Cachmawri. “This might work.”
“You’ve only started,” Cachmawri replied. “We’ll see if he remains calm.”
Lucian nodded, then looked back at me. “But there’s more. Not only you are Merlin’s decedent, you are his heir to his position.”
“Heir to what?” I asked.
“The position of Merlin’s Heir,” Cachmawri replied.
“Okay,” I said, looking from cat to ghost and back again. “Which means what?”
“Which means you’re a wizard,” Lucian replied.
“A wizard?” I said, leaning forward. “As in magic?”
“Yes,” Lucian said.
“Real magic and not some sort of stage show?”
“Yes.”
“Like Gandalf, Harry Potter, Harry Dresden—”
“Yes!” Cachmawri snapped in annoyance.
“Cachmawri,” Lucian said gently. Then to me, he said, “Yes, Roger. Sixty-one generations of Merlins have followed the original in defending this world against those who seek humanity’s destruction.”
“Like what?”
“Demons, for one,” Cachmawri said.
“Demons?” I asked. “Real demons?”
“Demons are real, Roger,” Lucian said. “In fact, if you think of all the legendary creatures you’ve read or heard about in documentaries, there’s a grain of truth to most of them.”
“There is?”
“Yes.”
“And I have to fight them?”
"No,” Cachmawri said. ‘Most of the time, it acting as an intermediary between humanity and parabeings.”
“Parabeings?”
“The general term for those creatures that don’t fit into normal classification,” Lucian said.
“Intermediary?”
“The person who is Merlin’s Heir is one of the few humans parabeings take seriously,” Cachmawri said. “Sometimes the Heir has to protect humanity from the parabeings, other times, the Heir has to protect the parabeings from humanity. In addition, the Heir watches for magic misuse on both sides.”
I held up my hands and stood. “Wait a minute!” I said, “Give me a few minutes to process this!” I began walking up and down. “You want me to become the new Merlin’s Heir, right?”
“Yes,” Lucian said.
“And you’re a wizard, right?”
“I was a wizard. Now, I’m a ghost.”
“So, I’m a wizard too, right?”
“You have the ability.”
“Why me? Why not one of my uncles or my sister or brother?”
“Because you’re the only one in two generations of Merlins that has a Magus Sensus.”
I stopped and looked at him. “A what?”
“Magus Sensus,” Cachmawri said. “Latin for ‘Magical Sense.’ It means you have the ability to sense and tap into the energy necessary for magic.”
“What energy?”
“The energy all around us. For example, Lumen Globus.”
A sphere of light the size of a softball appeared above Cachmawri’s head. It glowed with about the same light as a flashlight. “There is energy all around us, Roger,” Cachmawri said. “Different types, but all can be tapped for different spells. For example this glow globe is using the energy from the light on the table back there. Now watch what happens when I use another form of energy. Ingnus Globus.”
The ball of light suddenly became a ball of fire, and even from several feet away I could feel the heat It floated there like a miniature sun. “Dispellere,” Cachmawri said and the fireball vanished.
“Anyone with a strong enough Magus Sensus can use magic,” Lucian said. “The problem is that only six hundred thousand people world-wide have even the rudimentary sense, and of that number, maybe six thousand people have a strong enough Magus Sensus to use magic.”
“And I’m one of those six thousand?”
Lucian nodded. “The Merlin line has always had strong wizards through the centuries.”
“If I have this Magus Sensus, why didn't I know about before this?”
“When you were a newborn, I set up blocks around your Magus Sensus.”
“I think I remember that,” I said. I held up my hand with the ring. “When I put on this ring, I had a flash of memory. You were leaning over me in the maternity ward.”
Lucian nodded. “The ring is the symbol of the position of Merlin’s Heir. It has been passed down through generations of Merlins.”
“So, what about this Magus Sensus? Is it dangerous?”
“Only to the untrained,” Cachmawri replied.
“The blocks prevent you from accessing your Magus Sensus unless you happen to be near a place of strong concentration of energy,” Lucian said, “like my tomb.”
“Your tomb,” I said.
Lucian nodded. “My tomb is surrounded by wards designed to prevent anyone from breaking into my tomb and disturbing my body. It was the energy fueling the wards that you used to send those thugs flying.”
“When I heard voices at your tomb, it was you?”
“It was.”
I began pacing again. “So, I can use magic, in order to be the protector of humanity against Parabeings and vice versa. I have this magical sense—”
“Magus Sensus,” Cachmawri said.
“Right,” I said. “Magus Sensi-thingie that allows me to feel and manipulate the energy around me and cast spells like a RPG wizard.”
“RPG?” Cachmawri asked.
“Role-playing game,” Lucian replied.
I stopped and looked at Lucian again. “So, why are you dead?”
“I was murdered.”
“Yes, shot, then fell. Why didn’t you defend yourself?”
Lucian scowled. “Because being a wizard doesn’t make you immune to bullets or grant you the ability to automatically detect a sniper. We can do things most humans only dream of, but we are still human.”
“Any idea who shot you?”
“No. I was shot in the back and had no time to do anything.”
“Why were you out there at night?”
Lucian became sober. “I made a mistake.”
“A mistake?” I asked.
He nodded. “There’s been a series of incidents, involving churches being broken into and desecrated and livestock missing.”
“Yes, I know about them. The sheriff thinks it’s kids fooling around with Satanism.”
“It’s much more than that,” Cachmawri said.
“Cachmawri’s right,” Lucian said. “I also thought it was kids fooling around, but I found sings that this was something much darker and serious.”
“What did you find?”
“Evidence of a sorcerer.”
I frowned. “Sorcerer?”
“There are two types of Magic users,” Cachmawri said. “Wizards and sorcerers.”
“What’s the difference?”
“Wizards use the energy around them for their magic,” Lucian said. “But sorcerers use unnatural energy for their spells.”
“Unnatural energy?” I asked.
“Sorcerers deal with demons to gain their power. They use demonic energy to fuel their spells. On the one hand, they don’t need to have a Magus Sensus to cast spells, and they can become dangerous in a matter of weeks or months. On the other hand—”
“They have to deal with demons,” I finished. “And I’m guessing demons don’t hand out that much power for free.”
“They don’t,” Cachmawri said.
I nodded. “So, there’s a demon-dealing sorcerer in the area.”
“Worse than that,” Lucian said. “There’s a demonic cult operating in the area.”
“A demonic cult?” I said.
Lucian took several steps away from the fireplace. “Yes, Roger. I should have seen the signs earlier, recognized them, but I allowed myself to be lulled into a false sense of security.”
“You can’t blame yourself.”
“Yes, I can. Once more, I should have seen it earlier because I’d seen the same signs back in the aftermath of World War Two.”
“I’m guessing you didn’t fight a normal war.”
“Not as you know it. What do you know of Nazi Occultism?”
“I know a few of the top leadership were obsessed with it. Heinrich Himmler comes to mind.”
Lucian nodded. “Himmler was obsessed with the occult, and he gathered experts together and began contacting several demon lords for aid and power.”
“He offer souls in return for the power,” Cachmawri said. “Innocent souls.”
“Himmler formed a department in the SS simply called Office 51, and placed the resources of the SS at their disposal. Office 51 handled all sorcerer activity, and ran their own concentration camp to supply both labor and souls for the demon lords. When word got out, it sent shockwaves through the magic and parabeing community. Some groups sealed themselves away, while others looked to join the Nazis. But most saw the danger for what it was.”
“You fought.”
“The Allies gathered wizards and we fought the war on the mystical level,” Lucian said. “And we managed to disrupt most of their operations, including several last-ditch efforts that could have prolonged the war and turn it into a nightmare.
“Good for you,” I said. Cachmawri sighed.
After the war,” Lucian continued, “I spent five years hunting down remnants of Office 51, destroying or seizing objects and files from the survivors. Most of the Nazi sorcerers who went underground would set up in an area, slowly recruit followers, contact one of the demon lords and begin to build a base of power. Most moved too fast or overreached themselves and were destroyed. But a few managed to evade justice and went underground.”
“So you think that a Nazi demonic cult is operating here in Pilgrim’s Cove?”
“A demonic cult, almost certainly,” Cachmawri said.”There’s no evidence that there’s any Nazi influence.”
“Several objects from Office 51 were never recovered,” Lucian said. “They’re still out there and still dangerous in the hands of wrong people.”
“We’re getting sidetracked here,” I said. “Uncle Lucian, How bad can this demon cult be?”
“If they summon a demon, and the demon gains a foothold in this world? Bad, on a scale that would make World War Two look like a pillow fight.”
“Oh, crap.”
“In more ways than one,” Lucian said.
“If the Circle finds out about it, they’ll do anything to stop it.”
“Who’s the Circle?” I asked.
“The Excalibur Circle are the decedents of the original Knights of the Round Table,” Cachmawri said. “When it comes to things like demons and sorcerers, they are ruthless and tend to destroy everything in the zeal to hunt these people down.”
“Define zeal.”
“Remember those fires out west last year? The one in which a dozen people were killed and an entire mountain town?”
“Vaguely.”
“That was the Circle, hunting down and destroying a demon cult. The fire was set to destroy the evidence.”
“Wonderful,” I muttered. “Uncle Lucian, why were you out at Table Rock when you were murdered?”
“I was investigating the area because I found traces of a recent demonic ceremony,” Lucian said.
“Why here?” I asked.
“This area has several intersecting lay lines,” Cachmawri said. “The energy around here is much greater than in many other places.”
“Okay, fine,” I said and began pacing again. “What do you want from me?”
“Find the demonic cult and stop them,” Lucian said. “Find the person who murdered me. Become the new Merlin’s Heir.”
I stopped as my head began to throb. “Oh,” I said. “Just like that?”
“Just like that.”
“I don’t know anything about magic!”
“Cachmawri can teach you,” Lucian said. “he has been the mentor for fifteen generations of Merlin Heirs.”
I looked at the cat. “Fifteen generations?”
“I am much older than I look,” Cachmawri said.
“Five hundred years?”
“About that.”
The throbbing in my head got worse. I put my fingers on my temples and began massaging them. “I’m getting information overload.”
“We don’t have time to deal with your disbelief,” Cachmawri said, sounding annoyed.
“Which is why I included the stipulation that Roger spend the night alone,” Lucian said. “I know we couldn't expect him to digest everything quickly.”
The cat looked at the ghost. “This is going to take longer than one night.”
“We have several more hours before Charlie makes the second call. We’d better show him the Sanctum.”
“Are you sure?”
“We have to show him what Merlin’s Heir has to work with.”
Cachmawri sighed. “All right. Roger.”
I stopped rubbing my temples. “What?”
“I need you to open the Sanctum.”
I stared at him. “The what?”
The cat hopped off the chair. “Follow me.”
We went over to the bookcase to the right of the painting. Cachmawri sat in front of the painting, facing me. “Now,” he said, “place your left hand on the outside of the bookcase, about shoulder high.” I did so. Cachmawri stared at where my hand was. “Move your hand up two inches and toward you half an inch.”
I did so, and felt the wood under my hand give. “Don’t push it yet,” Cachmawri said. “Now, with your right hand, reach out to that red leather book on the fourth shelf, just above eye level.”
“Of Mice and Men?” I asked, reading the title off the book’s spine.
Place your hand on top of the book and pull it toward you at the same time pressing the button on the side of the bookshelf.”
I did as directed and I head a “click.” The entire bookcase swung away from the wall and to my right, leaving a dark space behind it. Cachmawri stood and walked into the darkness. “Follow me,” he said, his tone echoing. I glanced back at Lucian, who nodded silently. Taking a deep breath, I went into the darkness.
Craig
On the writing front, the African Firestorm outline is over 11,000 and complete up to Chapter 38, heading into Chapter 39. I'm beginning to see the end, but the climax is going to tricky to write, as I have to wrap all the threads together to complete the story. I know how the story ends --- I just need to get it there....
The Battletech stories are going well, I'll update them in my Battletech blog (http://thebattletechstate.blogspot.com/). Just suffice it to say, they are going well.
And I've decided to go a little bit farther in bringing the first draft of Merlin's Legacy to you, the reader. Here is part one of Chapter 7:
***
I don’t know how long I laid there like a stunned fish, but when my senses started working again, I heard voices. One was the cat’s, while the other I vaguely recognized.
“It’s tradition!” the cat was saying.
“The situation is different,” the second voice said.
“Are you sure he’s the one?”
“You didn’t see him when those thugs attacked him. He used the energy powering the wards around my tomb and channeled it through him with only a little help from me. And that was with his Magus Sensus blocked.”
“But he has so much to learn!”
“And that is my fault, old friend. But he will learn for you.”
“You should have brought him in sooner.”
The second voice sighed. “I’ve already said it’s my fault. But the point is moot. And Roger has recovered.”
I groaned and sat up. “What’s going on?” I asked.
“That is my fault, I’m afraid.”
I looked up and found myself staring up at the mirror image of the painting of the library. He was wearing the bomber jacket, military trousers, and boots. I glanced at his hand and the dragon ring was there. “Uncle Lucian?”
“Hello, Roger,” Lucian said, smiling at me. “Sorry about this, but it’s time you and I had a talk.”
“But you’re dead!”
“That’s one of the things we have to talk about. I have an offer for you, one that will change your life.”
“What?”
Lucian sighed. “Get up and we can continue this in the library.”
I got up slowly. “But you’re dead!”
“Yes, I know.”
“But you’re here! And young!”
“I’m here, yes, but I’m dead, and I’m a ghost.”
I was on my feet now and looking at him. “But I can see you!”
“Try touching me.”
I reached out had tried to put my hand on his chest, only to have my hand pass through his body. I pulled my hand back and tried again, with the same result. I pulled my hand and looked at it. “I must be dreaming,” I muttered
Sharp pain lanced through my left calf as if someone had pressed a nail against it. I yelped and hopped back.
Lucian looked down. “That wasn’t very nice, Cachmawri,” he said in a disapproving tone.
“We don’t have time for him to work through his disbelief,” the cat replied, walking past me and into the library. “There’s a lot he needs to know and only a little time to explain it in.”
Lucian nodded. “He’s right. We need to move this along.”
I walked into the library. Cach was sitting on a chair. He raised a paw and pointed at a nearby chair. “Sit.”
I sat.
Lucian walked over to stand near the fireplace. He stared into the fire for a few seconds. “Roger,” he said. “Have you ever thought about our last name?”
“Merlin?” I shrugged. “I got teased about it for a few years, but no, not really.”
“What would you say if I told you that Merlin of the Arthurian legends was a real person, and you are his decedent?”
I blinked at him. “Okay.”
“You accept that?”
“I’m talking to a ghost and a cat and not freaking out.”
Lucian smiled, making him look younger. “Good.” He looked over at Cachmawri. “This might work.”
“You’ve only started,” Cachmawri replied. “We’ll see if he remains calm.”
Lucian nodded, then looked back at me. “But there’s more. Not only you are Merlin’s decedent, you are his heir to his position.”
“Heir to what?” I asked.
“The position of Merlin’s Heir,” Cachmawri replied.
“Okay,” I said, looking from cat to ghost and back again. “Which means what?”
“Which means you’re a wizard,” Lucian replied.
“A wizard?” I said, leaning forward. “As in magic?”
“Yes,” Lucian said.
“Real magic and not some sort of stage show?”
“Yes.”
“Like Gandalf, Harry Potter, Harry Dresden—”
“Yes!” Cachmawri snapped in annoyance.
“Cachmawri,” Lucian said gently. Then to me, he said, “Yes, Roger. Sixty-one generations of Merlins have followed the original in defending this world against those who seek humanity’s destruction.”
“Like what?”
“Demons, for one,” Cachmawri said.
“Demons?” I asked. “Real demons?”
“Demons are real, Roger,” Lucian said. “In fact, if you think of all the legendary creatures you’ve read or heard about in documentaries, there’s a grain of truth to most of them.”
“There is?”
“Yes.”
“And I have to fight them?”
"No,” Cachmawri said. ‘Most of the time, it acting as an intermediary between humanity and parabeings.”
“Parabeings?”
“The general term for those creatures that don’t fit into normal classification,” Lucian said.
“Intermediary?”
“The person who is Merlin’s Heir is one of the few humans parabeings take seriously,” Cachmawri said. “Sometimes the Heir has to protect humanity from the parabeings, other times, the Heir has to protect the parabeings from humanity. In addition, the Heir watches for magic misuse on both sides.”
I held up my hands and stood. “Wait a minute!” I said, “Give me a few minutes to process this!” I began walking up and down. “You want me to become the new Merlin’s Heir, right?”
“Yes,” Lucian said.
“And you’re a wizard, right?”
“I was a wizard. Now, I’m a ghost.”
“So, I’m a wizard too, right?”
“You have the ability.”
“Why me? Why not one of my uncles or my sister or brother?”
“Because you’re the only one in two generations of Merlins that has a Magus Sensus.”
I stopped and looked at him. “A what?”
“Magus Sensus,” Cachmawri said. “Latin for ‘Magical Sense.’ It means you have the ability to sense and tap into the energy necessary for magic.”
“What energy?”
“The energy all around us. For example, Lumen Globus.”
A sphere of light the size of a softball appeared above Cachmawri’s head. It glowed with about the same light as a flashlight. “There is energy all around us, Roger,” Cachmawri said. “Different types, but all can be tapped for different spells. For example this glow globe is using the energy from the light on the table back there. Now watch what happens when I use another form of energy. Ingnus Globus.”
The ball of light suddenly became a ball of fire, and even from several feet away I could feel the heat It floated there like a miniature sun. “Dispellere,” Cachmawri said and the fireball vanished.
“Anyone with a strong enough Magus Sensus can use magic,” Lucian said. “The problem is that only six hundred thousand people world-wide have even the rudimentary sense, and of that number, maybe six thousand people have a strong enough Magus Sensus to use magic.”
“And I’m one of those six thousand?”
Lucian nodded. “The Merlin line has always had strong wizards through the centuries.”
“If I have this Magus Sensus, why didn't I know about before this?”
“When you were a newborn, I set up blocks around your Magus Sensus.”
“I think I remember that,” I said. I held up my hand with the ring. “When I put on this ring, I had a flash of memory. You were leaning over me in the maternity ward.”
Lucian nodded. “The ring is the symbol of the position of Merlin’s Heir. It has been passed down through generations of Merlins.”
“So, what about this Magus Sensus? Is it dangerous?”
“Only to the untrained,” Cachmawri replied.
“The blocks prevent you from accessing your Magus Sensus unless you happen to be near a place of strong concentration of energy,” Lucian said, “like my tomb.”
“Your tomb,” I said.
Lucian nodded. “My tomb is surrounded by wards designed to prevent anyone from breaking into my tomb and disturbing my body. It was the energy fueling the wards that you used to send those thugs flying.”
“When I heard voices at your tomb, it was you?”
“It was.”
I began pacing again. “So, I can use magic, in order to be the protector of humanity against Parabeings and vice versa. I have this magical sense—”
“Magus Sensus,” Cachmawri said.
“Right,” I said. “Magus Sensi-thingie that allows me to feel and manipulate the energy around me and cast spells like a RPG wizard.”
“RPG?” Cachmawri asked.
“Role-playing game,” Lucian replied.
I stopped and looked at Lucian again. “So, why are you dead?”
“I was murdered.”
“Yes, shot, then fell. Why didn’t you defend yourself?”
Lucian scowled. “Because being a wizard doesn’t make you immune to bullets or grant you the ability to automatically detect a sniper. We can do things most humans only dream of, but we are still human.”
“Any idea who shot you?”
“No. I was shot in the back and had no time to do anything.”
“Why were you out there at night?”
Lucian became sober. “I made a mistake.”
“A mistake?” I asked.
He nodded. “There’s been a series of incidents, involving churches being broken into and desecrated and livestock missing.”
“Yes, I know about them. The sheriff thinks it’s kids fooling around with Satanism.”
“It’s much more than that,” Cachmawri said.
“Cachmawri’s right,” Lucian said. “I also thought it was kids fooling around, but I found sings that this was something much darker and serious.”
“What did you find?”
“Evidence of a sorcerer.”
I frowned. “Sorcerer?”
“There are two types of Magic users,” Cachmawri said. “Wizards and sorcerers.”
“What’s the difference?”
“Wizards use the energy around them for their magic,” Lucian said. “But sorcerers use unnatural energy for their spells.”
“Unnatural energy?” I asked.
“Sorcerers deal with demons to gain their power. They use demonic energy to fuel their spells. On the one hand, they don’t need to have a Magus Sensus to cast spells, and they can become dangerous in a matter of weeks or months. On the other hand—”
“They have to deal with demons,” I finished. “And I’m guessing demons don’t hand out that much power for free.”
“They don’t,” Cachmawri said.
I nodded. “So, there’s a demon-dealing sorcerer in the area.”
“Worse than that,” Lucian said. “There’s a demonic cult operating in the area.”
“A demonic cult?” I said.
Lucian took several steps away from the fireplace. “Yes, Roger. I should have seen the signs earlier, recognized them, but I allowed myself to be lulled into a false sense of security.”
“You can’t blame yourself.”
“Yes, I can. Once more, I should have seen it earlier because I’d seen the same signs back in the aftermath of World War Two.”
“I’m guessing you didn’t fight a normal war.”
“Not as you know it. What do you know of Nazi Occultism?”
“I know a few of the top leadership were obsessed with it. Heinrich Himmler comes to mind.”
Lucian nodded. “Himmler was obsessed with the occult, and he gathered experts together and began contacting several demon lords for aid and power.”
“He offer souls in return for the power,” Cachmawri said. “Innocent souls.”
“Himmler formed a department in the SS simply called Office 51, and placed the resources of the SS at their disposal. Office 51 handled all sorcerer activity, and ran their own concentration camp to supply both labor and souls for the demon lords. When word got out, it sent shockwaves through the magic and parabeing community. Some groups sealed themselves away, while others looked to join the Nazis. But most saw the danger for what it was.”
“You fought.”
“The Allies gathered wizards and we fought the war on the mystical level,” Lucian said. “And we managed to disrupt most of their operations, including several last-ditch efforts that could have prolonged the war and turn it into a nightmare.
“Good for you,” I said. Cachmawri sighed.
After the war,” Lucian continued, “I spent five years hunting down remnants of Office 51, destroying or seizing objects and files from the survivors. Most of the Nazi sorcerers who went underground would set up in an area, slowly recruit followers, contact one of the demon lords and begin to build a base of power. Most moved too fast or overreached themselves and were destroyed. But a few managed to evade justice and went underground.”
“So you think that a Nazi demonic cult is operating here in Pilgrim’s Cove?”
“A demonic cult, almost certainly,” Cachmawri said.”There’s no evidence that there’s any Nazi influence.”
“Several objects from Office 51 were never recovered,” Lucian said. “They’re still out there and still dangerous in the hands of wrong people.”
“We’re getting sidetracked here,” I said. “Uncle Lucian, How bad can this demon cult be?”
“If they summon a demon, and the demon gains a foothold in this world? Bad, on a scale that would make World War Two look like a pillow fight.”
“Oh, crap.”
“In more ways than one,” Lucian said.
“If the Circle finds out about it, they’ll do anything to stop it.”
“Who’s the Circle?” I asked.
“The Excalibur Circle are the decedents of the original Knights of the Round Table,” Cachmawri said. “When it comes to things like demons and sorcerers, they are ruthless and tend to destroy everything in the zeal to hunt these people down.”
“Define zeal.”
“Remember those fires out west last year? The one in which a dozen people were killed and an entire mountain town?”
“Vaguely.”
“That was the Circle, hunting down and destroying a demon cult. The fire was set to destroy the evidence.”
“Wonderful,” I muttered. “Uncle Lucian, why were you out at Table Rock when you were murdered?”
“I was investigating the area because I found traces of a recent demonic ceremony,” Lucian said.
“Why here?” I asked.
“This area has several intersecting lay lines,” Cachmawri said. “The energy around here is much greater than in many other places.”
“Okay, fine,” I said and began pacing again. “What do you want from me?”
“Find the demonic cult and stop them,” Lucian said. “Find the person who murdered me. Become the new Merlin’s Heir.”
I stopped as my head began to throb. “Oh,” I said. “Just like that?”
“Just like that.”
“I don’t know anything about magic!”
“Cachmawri can teach you,” Lucian said. “he has been the mentor for fifteen generations of Merlin Heirs.”
I looked at the cat. “Fifteen generations?”
“I am much older than I look,” Cachmawri said.
“Five hundred years?”
“About that.”
The throbbing in my head got worse. I put my fingers on my temples and began massaging them. “I’m getting information overload.”
“We don’t have time to deal with your disbelief,” Cachmawri said, sounding annoyed.
“Which is why I included the stipulation that Roger spend the night alone,” Lucian said. “I know we couldn't expect him to digest everything quickly.”
The cat looked at the ghost. “This is going to take longer than one night.”
“We have several more hours before Charlie makes the second call. We’d better show him the Sanctum.”
“Are you sure?”
“We have to show him what Merlin’s Heir has to work with.”
Cachmawri sighed. “All right. Roger.”
I stopped rubbing my temples. “What?”
“I need you to open the Sanctum.”
I stared at him. “The what?”
The cat hopped off the chair. “Follow me.”
We went over to the bookcase to the right of the painting. Cachmawri sat in front of the painting, facing me. “Now,” he said, “place your left hand on the outside of the bookcase, about shoulder high.” I did so. Cachmawri stared at where my hand was. “Move your hand up two inches and toward you half an inch.”
I did so, and felt the wood under my hand give. “Don’t push it yet,” Cachmawri said. “Now, with your right hand, reach out to that red leather book on the fourth shelf, just above eye level.”
“Of Mice and Men?” I asked, reading the title off the book’s spine.
Place your hand on top of the book and pull it toward you at the same time pressing the button on the side of the bookshelf.”
I did as directed and I head a “click.” The entire bookcase swung away from the wall and to my right, leaving a dark space behind it. Cachmawri stood and walked into the darkness. “Follow me,” he said, his tone echoing. I glanced back at Lucian, who nodded silently. Taking a deep breath, I went into the darkness.
***
Craig
Monday, April 14, 2014
Back in the Saddle
I'm afraid last week was a washout, writing-wise, due to my friend's death. I managed only about 1100 words for the entire week, mostly at the end of it. Not much to add to African Firestorm. I think I'm going to have to go back and move a scene to an earlier chapter or order to make the timing work out.
But most of the writing that I did do last week was to start two new stories for the Battlecorps website. One is in a time period in the Battletech timeline I've never written in before, so I have the challenge of making it fit into the established facts. It's a challenge and one I need right now.
The other new story will be a tribute to my friend. I talked to Rob's mother late last week, and she said they think he went quickly. I hope I can do this story justice.
No Merlin's Legacy tonight. I'm going to let that sit for a while, until I plow through these other projects, then go back to it with fresh eyes.
Sorry for being so short tonight -- I need to write some before I go to bed.
Craig
But most of the writing that I did do last week was to start two new stories for the Battlecorps website. One is in a time period in the Battletech timeline I've never written in before, so I have the challenge of making it fit into the established facts. It's a challenge and one I need right now.
The other new story will be a tribute to my friend. I talked to Rob's mother late last week, and she said they think he went quickly. I hope I can do this story justice.
No Merlin's Legacy tonight. I'm going to let that sit for a while, until I plow through these other projects, then go back to it with fresh eyes.
Sorry for being so short tonight -- I need to write some before I go to bed.
Craig
Thursday, March 27, 2014
Merlin's Legacy, Chapter 6 part 1
Not much to report on the last couple of days. Been working through the Valiant RPG stuff, discussing a few things with other writers involved, and finally coming to a decision about how to complete this task. Nothing new on African Firestorm, beyond how I'm going to write the next chapter. Still researching though.
Now, for the next part of Merlin's Legacy:
(Edit: Sorry, the formatting was a bit off and I needed to fix it after I posted this entry)
Craig
Now, for the next part of Merlin's Legacy:
(Edit: Sorry, the formatting was a bit off and I needed to fix it after I posted this entry)
***
Donella took me into town for my shopping trip.
We’d driven back to the Nesbille house, where Charlie dropped us off. He said he had a couple of legal matters to finish up, but he’d be back in time for dinner. I was going to go into town on my own until Donella said, “I’ll go with you. If you’re going to be living here, you might as well get to know the locals. Besides, I know where everything is.”
I agreed, and after going inside to tell Abby where we were going, we got in her car and drove into town.
We parked in the town square, near the hardware shop. We got out and looked around. There were a few more people around, all the businesses were open, and all the charm of small-town life were on display.
Despite it being August, the air was chilly. I looked over at Donella. “Is it always this nippy this time of the year?”
“Its’s been below average for several weeks,” Donella replied. “Where to first?”
“Hardware store,” I replied, looking at the business in question. WIHITE HARDWARE, it read over the door. Danella gave me a puzzled look, but shrugged and followed me.
We walked across the road and into the hardware store. The smell of wood and oil tickled my nose as we walked in. There were four parallel aisles of hardware and equipment, stocked with the sort of items you would expect to find in a hardware store. 1950's era music was playing over the store’s sound system.
A counter was to out right as we came in. An older man was behind the counter. He was taller than me by several inches, and thin. His graying hair was nearly combed, but his eyebrows were in major need of a trimming. Dark brown eyes gazed out from behind a pair of thick glasses two decades out of date. “Donella!” he said cheerfully. “It’s been awhile. How’s Abby?”
“She’s fine,” Donella replied agreeable. “Mister Wihite, I need to introduce you to someone. Roger, this is Mister Wihite, who owns this store. Mister Wihite, this is Roger Merlin, Lucian’s great-nephew.”
I saw Wihite’s eyes light up with interest. He held out a boney hand. “Welcome to Pilgrim’s Cove, Mister Merlin,” he said. “When did you get into town?”
“Last night,” I replied.
Wihite nodded. “Lucian was a good man. He left this world far too soon, and he’ll be missed. Staying in town long?”
“It looks like I’m going to be around for a while.”
He nodded. “Good. Hope to see more of you. If you’ll excuse me.” Another customer, Another thin fellow with little hair and a beak for a nose, came to the counter while we were talking. I stepped back and let Wihite handle the customer. I grabbed a cart and chose the aisle farthest away from the counter. Donella followed. “What’s wrong?” she asked softly. I leaned in. “I’m competing with Lucian’s ghost,” I whispered. “Everyone loved him, now he’s gone and they’re expecting me to pick up where he left off.”
She placed a hand on my arm. “You,” she said firmly, “worry too much.”
“But I’m not Lucian Merlin!”
“Then be Roger Merlin,” she said, his eyes locking with mine. “I don’t think you were raised too differently than he was.” I found myself staring into those eyes, losing any objections I had. We blinked at the same time, and Donella said, “Let’s get what you want and get out of here.”
***
We spent the next ten minutes going around the store. A radio, two bundles of firewood, matches, and a lantern (with extra batteries) went into the cart. Donella began frowning when I added a hatchet, a baseball bat, a six-foot tall, one-inch diameter dowel rod, and a few wooden stakes to the cart. “It’s just a night in the house,” she said.
“I’m not taking any chances,” I replied.
“You realize how childish that sounds?”
“Yep.”
“Do you care?”
“Nope.”
“Are you planning to sleep?”
“Not if I can help it.”
“You’re overreacting.”
“Tell that to my bruises.” I tossed in a couple of large packages of beef jerky and a large bag of trail mix into the cart. “I’m going to be in a large house, all by myself, and there’s people who have twice tried to kill me, or at the very least, tried putting me into the hospital. I would prefer to over prepare and not need everything then to be under-prepared.”
“Donella!”
We both turned and saw Margaret Teague walking toward us. She was still wearing her business suit from this morning, though she had a basket on one arm. She gave me a brief, disapproving look, then beamed at Donella.
“Margaret!” Donella said brightly. “Oh, I don’t know if you’ve met—”
“We’ve met,” Margaret and I said at the same time.
“Oh.”
Margaret looked at the items in my cart. “Going camping?” she asked.
“Sort of,” I replied.
Margaret looked at Donella. “I’ve a new selection of collage brochures you you to look at.”
“I don’t know,” Donella said. “I really don’t want to leave Aunt—”
“Nonsense!” Margaret said. “Abby is able to take care of herself. It’s time you started living your own life, and the first step in that path is college.”
Donella sighed. “I don’t know if college is right for me,” she said.
“College is important!” Margaret said. “You are a bright and hardworking woman who will go far in the world. Or do you want to stay here and marry someone like him?” she waved a hand at me.
“I don’t want to discuss—”
“Is the estate wired for the Internet?” I asked.
Both women looked at me. “Yes,” Donella replied.
“Why not take some on-line courses?” I said. “Pick a couple of classes that’ll transfer to any college and take them. If you feel comfortable, then you can transfer to a college in person.”
“I don’t think—” Margaret began.
“I’ll think about it,” Donella said quickly. “If you’ll excuse me a minute, I just remembered that I need to pick up some hooks for Aunt Abby.” She hurried off.
I watched Donella until she disappeared, then turn back to find myself staring into a pair of green eyes. Only they were not playful, but hard and unyielding. “I will tell you only once, Merlin,” Margaret growled. “If you ever harm Donella in any way, I will make sure they never find your body, is that clear?”
My temper flared up, and instead of backing away, I leaned in, so we were nose to nose. “You listen to me,” I growled. “I do not hurt women, in any way. I would cut off my right arm before I would willing hurt her. Do I make myself clear?”
There was a brief flash of surprise in Margaret’s eyes, and she pulled back. “Maybe Lucian didn’t make a mistake,” she murmured, then smiled. “It may come down to doing that, Merlin. Enjoy your ‘camping trip.’” She turned and walked away, though the walk was more of a strut. I merely shook my head and continued shopping.
***
Craig
Tuesday, March 25, 2014
Sorry about yesterday......
For the first time in two and a half months, I missed a blog post....
Simply put, I forgot about it. I've been working on the Valiant RPG, trying to find any scraps of information I can use for the characters I'm responsible for. That means lurking around Valiant message boards, podcasts about the comic lines, and any wiki I can find. The 90s versions of these characters are vastly different (Including one that doesn't exist in the previous era!), and can supply little more than a quote or two and some minor details that I can use. Still, I've got most of the characters stats laid out, and I hope my approach to the background that has to combine three versions of the same character into one will meet with Valiant's approval.
I've also been googling stuff for African Firestorm. Locations, vehicles, weapons, and even language. Every detail I need to I need to write what I hope will be a great action thriller. The outline is complete through Chapter 35, and I'm still on course for my estimate. It's a bit of a challenge, as this is the first time I've done an outline in such detail before.
And so to make this a post worth reading, (Laugh now if you need to), here's another scene from Merlin's Legacy, Chapter 5!
I'll try and be on time Thursday!
Craig
Simply put, I forgot about it. I've been working on the Valiant RPG, trying to find any scraps of information I can use for the characters I'm responsible for. That means lurking around Valiant message boards, podcasts about the comic lines, and any wiki I can find. The 90s versions of these characters are vastly different (Including one that doesn't exist in the previous era!), and can supply little more than a quote or two and some minor details that I can use. Still, I've got most of the characters stats laid out, and I hope my approach to the background that has to combine three versions of the same character into one will meet with Valiant's approval.
I've also been googling stuff for African Firestorm. Locations, vehicles, weapons, and even language. Every detail I need to I need to write what I hope will be a great action thriller. The outline is complete through Chapter 35, and I'm still on course for my estimate. It's a bit of a challenge, as this is the first time I've done an outline in such detail before.
And so to make this a post worth reading, (Laugh now if you need to), here's another scene from Merlin's Legacy, Chapter 5!
***
We took Charlie’s Lincoln up to the house, some three hundred years in the opposite direction from the Nesbille house. The house was hidden by trees until we were almost on top of it, but when the last trees were past, it showed an unusual and somewhat foreboding, house.
My first thought when I saw it was “Castle.” Two large round towers were connected to each other by a square middle section, all made from the same stone I’d seen in the other buildings on the estate. The windows were narrow and each one barred with a single iron bar running lengthwise and one width-wise set into the stone.
Charlie parked the car in front of the middle section. We got out and I craned my neck to look up. “Wow,” I said.
“Impressive, isn’t it?” Charlie said.
“Yes, in a highly mediaeval way.”
“The view from the tower top is breathtaking,” Donella said.
Without warning, a pack of dogs appeared from every direction and surrounded us. All were large, well muscled animals, Pit Bulls, Mastiffs and a couple of other breeds I didn’t recognize. Then as one, they sat and stared at us.
A large man came around the side of the house. And I do mean large. He was pushing seven feet and broadly built. His face was broad with shaggy dark hair and half-closed eyes. His scowl was fearsome, and he held a stick that would be a baseball bat in anyone else’s hands. His clothing consisted of a shirt, army jacket, cargo pants tucked into hard-worn work boots. He stopped behind the dogs and glared at us.
Donella stepped forward. “Leal,” she said softly.
“Miss Donella,” Leal said gruffly. He looked at the Lawyer. “Mister Charlie.
he looked at me. “I don’t know you.”
“That’s Roger Merlin,” Donella said. “He’s the new owner of the estate. Lucian left the estate to him.”
“I want to see the ring,” Leal said, his voice sounding like it was coming out of a cave. “Mister Lucian said that the owner of the estate would be wearing the ring.”
I held up my right hand. “This ring?”
Leal stared at it for a few seconds, than dropped his head. “Yes,” he said.
Donella stepped between two of the dogs, who sat and watched her, and stood before the giant. “I know you don’t want things to change,” she said softly. But Lucian’s gone, and we can’t change that.”
“I know,” Leal said, his voice higher and more child-like. “But I miss him.”
Donella reached out and placed her hand on Leal’s chest. “I miss him too. We all do.”
Leal raised his head and looked at me. Gone was the firce glare. Instead, a lost child looked back at me. “I want to stay,” he said. “I can take care of this estate all by myself. Mister Lucian knew I could do it.”
I looked at Donella, who nodded. I looked up at Leal. “Leal, if you want to stay, you are welcomed to do so. If you keep this estate in the shape I’ve seen so far, than I’d been a fool to let anyone else do it.”
He smiled. “Thank you, Mister Roger. I promise to keep doing good work.” He looked at the dogs. “Come!” he barked. He turned and strode away. As one, the dogs leapt to their feet and followed Leal. We watched him walk away until he disappeared into the trees, surrounded by the dogs.
“That’s Leal, huh?” I said.
Donella turned and walked back toward me. “Yes, and he does good work, as you can see.”
“Then I see no reason to change anything,” I said.
“Let’s get this over with,” Charlie said.
We followed Charlie up to the front door, which were actually a pair of large, iron-reinforced wooden doors. He took a large, old fashion key from his pocket, unlocked the door with a heavy “thunk” and opened both doors. The doors opened silently, instead of the creaking I half-expected. Charlie stepped to one side and with a flourish, motioned us forward. “Your castle, Mister Merlin.”
We entered a hall large enough to play a full court game of basketball in, including a two story high ceiling. A set of stairs were on the left side of the hall, leading up to a balcony that ran along the back of the hall. Three sets of mediaeval-style wooden doors lead deeper into the home. One set was to our left, near the base of the stairs, another set was to out right, and the last set straight ahead of us, under the balcony. The walls, floor, staircase, and ceiling were all stone. There was plenty of light, coming from several skylights, but there were a pair of chandeliers handing from the ceiling for other times.
Furnishings consisted of a large blue and white carpet in the center of the hall, and a large coat rack to our left with enough hooks for a couple of dozen coats. A pair of full-sized suits of armor stood sentry next to the doors on out right and left. and several paintings hung on the wall.
Charlie walked into the hall and faced us. “Lucian made it clear in his will that the south tower,” He motioned to the doors on out right, “is yours to furnish as you see fit. It’s empty, but it’s move-in ready.”
“How many bedrooms?” I asked.
“A total of six,” Donella replied. “Four in the south tower, and two in the center hall here. The kitchen is through there.” She pointed at the doors under the balcony.
“What’s in the north tower?’ I asked.
Windicott walked over to the doors and opened them. “Come see,” he said, and stepped inside. “Lucian requested that you leave the tower as is, for the entire time you live here.”
We followed him and in the doorway, Charlie turning on the lights as he walked into the room. I stopped short and stared at amazement.
I love books. I love puttering around bookstores and libraries, seeing what they have to offer. I have nearly fifteen hundred books in my personal collection and have been teased by a few friends for having so many of them.
But this —
The library took up two entire floors of the tower, floor to ceiling bookcases built into the circular walls of the tower. The second floor of the library was accessible by a staircase built into the wall that rose to a balcony that ran around the tower’s circumference and the bookcases located there. The only breaks in the books were four narrow windows in each floor, the staircase, and a large oil painting of a man leaning and a pedestal. In the center, a massive four sided fireplace sat, a block column rising up through the ceiling holding the chimney. Half a dozen chairs and a trio of couches were scattered around the room, forming small conversation areas. Three large lights hung from the ceiling, and there were a few lamps on side tables near the conversation areas.
“Wow,” I whispered.
“Impressive, isn’t it?” Charlie said. “This is the most magnificent room I have even been in.”
“Lucian loved to read,” Donella said.
I turned and went over to the nearest bookcase. One shelf held leather-bound classic, while the shelf below it held modern hardback novels, including several authors I knew and loved. The next shelf held paperbacks and a few graphic novels, and even a few volumes of Manga.
“Fiction is down here,” Donella. “The non-fiction books are on the second floor. Somehow, Lucian knew where every book went, but I don’t know how he kept track of them all.”
“Amazing,” I said. I looked at the painting, which was hanging between a couple of bookcases. “That’s Uncle Lucian,” I said.
“He was very proud of that painting,” Charlie said. “He had that painted right after the war. He said that a concentration camp survivor painted for him as a thank-you for rescuing the artist and several hundred survivors from a concentration camp.”
I walked over to it. The man looking out of the painting was only a little older than me, wearing a bomber jacket, military trousers, and boots. The man was smiling, but there was a sadness in his eyes, and falseness about the smile. On his hand, he wore the same dragon ring that was on my finger right now. “What did he do in the war?”
“I really don’t know,” Charlie replied. “He mentioned very little about his service, but I always got the impression it was still classified.”
“Even after all this time?”
Charlie nodded, then looked at his watch. “I haven’t shown you the most unusual room,” he said. “It’s on the third floor.”
I followed Charlie and Donella up the stairs, past the balcony and up to the third floor. Charlie flipped on the light and I found myself in a museum.
Display cases lined the wall and were scattered around the chamber. The stone column that held the chimney ran up through the center of the room. As with the library below, there were four narrow barred windows paced evenly around the room.
I felt the hairs on the back of neck rise. I could feel there was something in this room, subtle, complex, and just beyond my reach. Something was going on here, but I didn’t know what.
“What is this place?”
“Lucian called it his ‘Museum of Light,”” Charlie said. “He rarely talked about it.”
“I looked at the display case closest to the stairs. It had a beaded head dress wrapped around a mannequin’s head. A small printed card laid in front. “HOPI MEDICINE MAN’S HEADBAND, GIFTED, JUNE 15, 1955," it read.
“Lucian traveled the world,” Charlie said. “Sometimes, he came home with items like that. I can’t tell you where he got some of these things.”
I walked around the room. There were a few weapons, most looking as lethal as they day they had been made. But most were mundane items, ranging from a bible used by a fifteen century saint to hairpins of a eighteen-century French courtesan. Everything was displayed and carefully mounted. After one circuit of the exhibits, I looked at Charlie. “Are these insured?”
“I don’t know,” Charlie replied. “Vikki Spiro handled all of Lucian’s insurance needs. I’ll give you her phone number in the morning.”
“Fine,” I said, looking around the room. “It’s just wow.”
“There’s one more thing you need to see,” Charlie said. “It’ll be a bit windy, but worth the effort.”
We went back to the stairs and went up. At the top of the stairs, the door had two strong springs keeping it close. Charlie unbolted the door and pushed it open.
The wind was strong, a constant strong breeze that smelt of salt spray. The tower roof was flat and surrounded by a waist-high wall and crenels that rose higher than my head. I moved to one of the opens and was struck with a blast of moist wind.
Charlie was right — the view was magnificent. I could see far out into the ocean. I moved to my right and could see some of Pilgrim’s Cove, through I could have seen more of it from the other tower. Another ninety degrees to the right and I could see several miles inland. And the final quarter showed mostly forest, couple of roads, and a few houses.
I turned and looked at Donella and Charlie. “Incredible!” I shouted with joy.
“We’d better get inside!” Charlie shouted.
I nodded and we went downstairs to the library. We spent another half-hour looking at the rest of the house. The kitchen was large, with plenty of places for food and cooking supplies, with an attached dining room large enough for twenty people. The second floor of the center hall had two bedrooms, a study (With an actual window!) and a sitting room. The south tower was an empty, three-story structure with enough room for a family of six. Behind the house, a courtyard lead to a second courtyard that looked out across the cliffs to the ocean. The wind was constant, but on days of calm, this would be a nice place to have a party.
When we returned to the main hall, Charlie glanced at his watch. “It’s about four-thirty,” he said. “Abby won’t be serving dinner until about six. So, what do you want to do until then?”
I thought for a moment. “Shopping trip,” I replied.
***
I'll try and be on time Thursday!
Craig
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